Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

When I was a child, my mother gave me a pink bike in my birthday.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

To be honestly, in my country, major in major individuals, uh, keen on uh reading bicycle, but sometimes all people prefer to drive a car. Uh I think the bicycle is not popular.

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: Soruyu doğrudan yanıtlıyorsunuz; ancak “in my birthday” yerine “for my birthday” veya “on my birthday” kullanmalısınız. Yanıtı daha doğal ve açıklayıcı yapmak için bisikleti ne zaman kullandığınızı ya da onunla ilgili bir anınızı ekleyin.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. My mother gave me a pink bike for my birthday when I was a child, and I used to ride it around our neighborhood.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 35.0

Gợi ý: “To be honestly” yerine “To be honest” deyin. “Major in major individuals” ve “reading bicycle” ifadeleri doğal ve anlaşılır değil; muhtemelen “most people” ve “riding bicycles” demek istiyorsunuz. Cevabınızdaki çelişkiyi giderin: Bisikletlerin popüler olup olmadığını net biçimde belirtin ve araba kullanımını bu fikri destekleyen bir ayrıntı olarak açıklayın. Dolgu seslerini azaltıp iki kısa, bağlantılı cümle kurun.

Ví dụ: I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country. Although some people ride them for exercise, most people prefer to drive because it is more convenient.

Ngữ pháp

11: Incorrect use of prepositions

× When I was a child, my mother gave me a pink bike in my birthday.

✓ When I was a child, my mother gave me a pink bike on my birthday.

Use on with a specific day or date, including a birthday. In is not the correct preposition in this expression.

13: Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× To be honestly, in my country, major in major individuals, uh, keen on uh reading bicycle, but sometimes all people prefer to drive a car. Uh I think the bicycle is not popular.

✓ To be honest, in my country, the majority of individuals are keen on riding bicycles, but sometimes people prefer to drive cars. I think bicycles are not popular.

The expression is to be honest, not to be honestly: honest is an adjective used after be. The original sentence also lacks a clear subject and verb in the phrase about individuals, so use the majority of individuals are. Use riding bicycles to express the likely intended activity, and the plural bicycles to refer to bicycles in general.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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