Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Uh, OK uh, yes, I had a small, uh, rent bike when I was child uh, my father bought it for my, uh, 12th birthday and it has training walls at first, so I learned to write uh, fast. Uh, I use it, it to go to uh, the.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, of course, and the bikes are popular in my country in in my country, not in my village because the peoples have a anymore bikers. So bikers because they are used to the the is it is another.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: Answer directly, then give one or two clear details. Reduce fillers such as “uh,” and avoid restarting phrases. Use the correct expressions “when I was a child,” “training wheels,” and “learned to ride.” Finish your final thought rather than leaving the sentence incomplete.
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. My father bought me a small bike for my twelfth birthday, and it had training wheels at first. I learned to ride it quite quickly and used it to get around my neighborhood.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 20.0Gợi ý: Give a clear yes-or-no response and explain your view with one specific comparison or reason. Avoid repeating “in my country” and complete your ideas. Use natural phrases such as “bikes are popular” and “people use them,” rather than repeating “bikers.”
Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country, especially in cities. Many people use them for short journeys because they are convenient and inexpensive. In my village, however, people seem to use them less often.
× I had a small, uh, rent bike when I was child.
✓ I had a small, uh, rent bike when I was a child.
The singular countable noun child needs an article. Use a before child: I was a child.
× It has training walls at first.
✓ It had training wheels at first.
The answer describes the bike in the past, so use the past-tense form had rather than has. Training wheels is the usual term for the small supporting wheels on a child's bike.
× I use it, it to go to uh, the.
✓ I used it to go to ...
The student is describing past use of the bike, so use used rather than use. Remove the repeated it; the phrase after to is incomplete in the transcript, so the destination cannot be corrected reliably.
× The peoples have a anymore bikers.
✓ The people have ... bikers.
People is already the plural form of person, so peoples is not appropriate here unless referring to distinct ethnic groups. The words after people are unclear in the transcript, so their intended meaning cannot be corrected reliably.