Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Actually no, I didn't have a bike when I was child because I don't know how to ride the bike but my brothers and my sister sister had a bike and they ride the bike correctly.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Of course yes, bikes are very popular now in my country because there in my country there are cars are so expensive and everyone can't use cars or motorcycles so they use bikes.

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: Answer directly, then give one clear reason or comparison. Use the past tense consistently: say “I didn’t know how to ride” and “my siblings rode.” Add the article in “when I was a child,” avoid repeating “bike,” and remove the repeated “sister.”

Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have a bike as a child because I didn’t know how to ride one. My siblings had bikes, though, and they often rode them around our neighborhood.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 48.0

Gợi ý: Start with a direct answer and explain the reason without repeating “in my country.” Use “bicycles” if you mean pedal-powered bikes, and say “not everyone can afford a car” rather than “everyone can’t use cars.” Break the long sentence into shorter, connected ideas.

Ví dụ: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country. Cars can be expensive, so many people choose to cycle for short journeys. It’s an affordable way to get around, especially in busy cities.

Ngữ pháp

22: Article errors

× Actually no, I didn't have a bike when I was child because I don't know how to ride the bike but my brothers and my sister sister had a bike and they ride the bike correctly.

✓ I was a child

The singular countable noun child needs an article. Use a before child.

5: Past tense issue

× Actually no, I didn't have a bike when I was child because I don't know how to ride the bike but my brothers and my sister sister had a bike and they ride the bike correctly.

✓ I didn't know how to ride a bike, but my brothers and my sister had bikes and rode them well.

The answer describes a situation in the past, so the verbs should also be in the past tense: know becomes knew, and ride becomes rode. Use rode rather than ride to keep the verb tense consistent with had.

3: There be issue

× Of course yes, bikes are very popular now in my country because there in my country there are cars are so expensive and everyone can't use cars or motorcycles so they use bikes.

✓ Of course, yes. Bikes are very popular in my country because cars are so expensive, and not everyone can use a car or motorcycle, so people use bikes.

The phrase there are cars are uses two competing sentence patterns: there are + noun and subject + verb. Use the direct pattern cars are so expensive. Also, not everyone can use is clearer than everyone can't use when you mean that some people cannot use cars or motorcycles.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Expensive— Costly
Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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