Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答有相关经历，但后半部分表达不清，且有几处用词和语法错误。注意：骑车应说“pedal”，不是“peddle”；“a very convenient way to get around”比“a very convenient thing”自然；“放弃了自行车”不符合这里的意思，可以说“我长大后就不再骑自己的自行车了，现在会用共享单车”。先直接回答，再补充一个具体回忆和现在的情况即可。

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used to ride it to the convenience store near my home. It was a convenient way to get around, but I stopped using it as I got older. These days, I usually rent a shared bike instead.

Gợi ý: 观点明确，也提供了共享单车的例子，但需要补上“I”，并把“shell bike”改为“shared bike”（共享单车）。表达平台时可说“through apps such as Alipay”；“the workplace”在这里不太自然，可用“work”或“the office”。删去重复的“You know”，并用一句简洁的结果说明共享单车为什么受欢迎。

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, especially shared bikes. People can rent them through apps such as Alipay, which makes short trips very convenient. Many people use them to get to work or travel around university campuses.

× I think having a bike is very convenient thing for me so that I can ride it to go anywhere I want, but I have abandoned since I grew up because I use a shelf bike.

✓ I think having a bike is a very convenient thing for me, so I can ride it anywhere I want. But I stopped using it when I grew up because I use a shelf bike.

这里描述的是“长大后”发生的过去情况，使用一般过去时 stopped 更合适；现在完成时 have abandoned 不适合与表示过去时间点的 when I grew up 搭配。另外，abandon 后需要宾语；改成 stopped using it 后，it 指代原来的自行车。

× I think having a bike is very convenient thing for me so that I can ride it to go anywhere I want, but I have abandoned since I grew up because I use a shelf bike.

✓ I think having a bike is a very convenient thing for me so that I can ride it to go anywhere I want, but I have abandoned since I grew up because I use a shelf bike.

thing 是可数名词单数，前面需要冠词。此处应在形容词 very 前加不定冠词 a，构成 a very convenient thing。

× Yeah, think bikes are very popular in my country, especially the shell bike.

✓ Yeah, I think bikes are very popular in my country, especially the shell bike.

think 在这里是主句谓语，需要有主语。补上 I 后，句子结构完整。回答时可以先检查每个谓语动词前是否有对应的主语。

× You know, we can rent a shell bike through the Alipay and the Kita so that we can use them to travel to the workplace and somewhere else such as the university, you know?

✓ You know, we can rent a shell bike through Alipay and Kita so that we can use them to travel to the workplace and somewhere else such as the university, you know?

如果 Alipay 和 Kita 是应用或平台的名称，通常直接使用名称，不在前面加定冠词 the。注意专有名称前一般不加 the；但如果名称本身包含 the，则应保留。