Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Answer directly, then describe one or two memorable features. Use the natural phrase “a small, cute basket” rather than “a little cute basket,” and clarify the mirror detail: the phrase “one of her on one of its handles” is difficult to understand. Avoid repeating that the bike was pink; the colour has already been mentioned.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. It was a bright pink bike with a small black basket. My father also bought me a Minnie Mouse mirror, which he attached to the handlebar. I loved riding it around my neighbourhood.

Gợi ý: Give a clear, direct answer and support it with a specific reason or example. Avoid the sweeping claim “Every citizen” and say “many people” if that better reflects your view. Use “cars” or “motor vehicles” instead of the unclear singular “vehicle,” and avoid repeating “bicycle” and “bike” as if they were different options.

Ví dụ: No, I don’t think bikes are very popular where I live. Many people prefer cars or motorbikes because they are more convenient for travelling longer distances. However, cycling is becoming more common in parks and on dedicated bike paths.

× It was magenta in colour and it had a little cute basket which was black.

✓ It was magenta in colour and it had a cute little basket which was black.

When adjectives describe a noun, opinion adjectives such as cute usually come before size adjectives such as little. Put cute before little.

× My father asked me if I also wanted this Minnie Mouse mirror or one of her on one of its handles and I agreed.

✓ My father asked me if I also wanted this Minnie Mouse mirror or one of her mirrors on one of its handles, and I agreed.

Her needs to be followed by the noun it refers to here. Use her mirrors to make clear that one refers to one mirror belonging to her.

× So it was a pink bicycle with pink mirror and black basket.

✓ So it was a pink bicycle with a pink mirror and a black basket.

Mirror and basket are singular countable nouns, so each needs an article in this sentence. Use a before each noun.

× Every citizen here prefers, uh, vehicle over a bicycle or even a bike.

✓ Every citizen here prefers, uh, a vehicle over a bicycle or even a bike.

Vehicle is a singular countable noun and needs an article when used this way. Add a before vehicle.