Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 先直接回答问题，并将“a back”改为“a bike”或“a bicycle”。“Thank you for question”不自然，可直接开始作答。说明父母买自行车的原因后，用一个具体细节补充，例如你在哪里骑车、父亲如何教你；避免以“and”结尾。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. My parents bought me a bicycle because they wanted me to have fun and exercise. I rode it to the playground every weekend, and my father taught me how to balance and steer.

Gợi ý: 开头可直接表达观点，不必说“OK, thank you for a question”。避免使用“all the people”这样的绝对表达，并将“the old, the young, the middle-aged”改成更自然的“people of all ages”。“brace the brush air”应改为“breathe the fresh air”。建议拆分过长的句子，并补完整周末的想法。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among people who enjoy exercising. People of all ages ride them, and some go to the countryside at weekends to get some fresh air. In cities, many people also use bikes for short trips.

× Thank you for question.

✓ Thank you for the question.

这里的“question”指考官刚刚提出的特定问题，应使用定冠词“the”。可以记住常用表达“Thank you for the question.”

× I rode it to the playground every weekend and my father taught me how to balance it and.

✓ I rode it to the playground every weekend, and my father taught me how to balance it.

句末多出的“and”会让人觉得后面还应接一个并列成分，但句子已经结束。说完完整内容后应删除这个连词。

× OK, thank you for a question.

✓ OK, thank you for the question.

这里感谢的是考官刚刚提出的特定问题，因此用“the question”更合适。回答具体问题时，可以使用“Thank you for the question.”

× And I think in our country bicycles are very popular because all the people including the old, the young, the middle-aged, they always get up very early to ride their bicycles, to go to the countryside, to brace the brush air and then maybe on weekends they.

✓ And I think bicycles are very popular in our country because people of all ages, including the old, the young, and the middle-aged, always get up very early to ride their bicycles, go to the countryside, and brace the brush air; perhaps they do the same on weekends.

“all the people including...”已经是从句中的主语，后面再接“they”会造成主语重复。可删除多余的“they”，或改写为“people of all ages...”。注意：这里仅修正代词问题；“brace the brush air”属于词汇表达问题，不在指定的语法问题类型范围内。

× ...and then maybe on weekends they.

✓ ...and perhaps they do the same on weekends.

原句以“they”结束，但没有谓语或完整意思，属于句子结构不完整。可以补上谓语“do the same”，使句子表达完整。