Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Of course I have. My dad bought one for me when I was six years old. I love that bike. I always ride that to school.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, I think so. There are so many people will to write that to go for walk, to go to school. You can see the bike everywhere in China.

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.5Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 62.0

Gợi ý: 回答基本切题,也给出了购买时间和用途等细节。注意问题使用过去时,开头应说“Of course I did”,后面描述童年经历时也要保持过去时,例如用“loved”和“rode”。另外,“ride that”不够自然,可改为“rode it”。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. My dad bought me a bike when I was six, and I loved it. I rode it to school almost every day.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 42.0

Gợi ý: 回答表达了自行车在中国很常见的观点,但中间句子有多处用词和语法错误:“will to write”应改为“ride”,而“go for walk”应为“go for a walk”。建议用一个清晰的主题句直接回答,再补充具体场景;“自行车到处可见”可表达为“bikes are everywhere”或“you can see bikes everywhere”。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in China. Many people ride them to school or work, especially for short journeys. You can see bikes everywhere in cities.

Ngữ pháp

5: Past tense issue(过去时错误)

× Of course I have.

✓ Of course I did.

问题询问的是过去(Did you have...),回答时也要用过去时。这里用 did 代替前面的 have,表示“我小时候有过自行车”。

5: Past tense issue(过去时错误)

× I always ride that to school.

✓ I always rode it to school.

这句话描述的是小时候的情况,应使用一般过去时:ride 的过去式是 rode。用 it 指代前面提到的自行车更自然。

26: Sentence structure errors(句子结构错误)

× There are so many people will to write that to go for walk, to go to school.

✓ There are so many people who ride bikes to go for a walk or to go to school.

原句把“There are so many people”和“will...”直接连接,结构不完整。可以用 who 引导定语从句修饰 people。表达经常发生的情况时,用一般现在时 ride;另外,write 应为 ride,表示“骑车”。

22: Article errors(冠词错误)

× to go for walk

✓ to go for a walk

固定表达是 go for a walk。walk 在这里是可数名词单数,前面需要加不定冠词 a。

1: Singular and plural issue(单复数问题)

× You can see the bike everywhere in China.

✓ You can see bikes everywhere in China.

这里泛指中国各地的自行车,应使用可数名词复数 bikes,而不是单数 the bike。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Many— Numerous; A great/good deal of
Old— Elderly; Dilapidated; Worn; Antique; Mature
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