Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Uh, I have a bike when I was a child. Uh, I bought a bike when I was 13. It took me a pretty long time to learn to, to learn how to ride a bike.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yeah, I think, I think bag is pretty popular in my country. A lot of people ride bikes to onto their commute times and so many people ride bikes.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 62.0

Gợi ý: 回答切题,也补充了买车年龄和学习经历。注意讲过去的事情要用过去时:将“I have”改为“I had”。“learn to, to learn how to”有重复,建议删去停顿和重复表达;还可以补充一个具体原因或结果,让回答更自然完整。

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I got it when I was 13, but it took me quite a while to learn how to ride it. I was nervous at first, but I eventually learned by practising with my friends.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 42.0

Gợi ý: 回答表达了“自行车很受欢迎”的观点,但存在重复和语法错误。“I think”重复;“bag”应为“bike”;“ride bikes to onto their commute times”不自然,可改为“ride bikes to commute to work”。建议说明哪些人骑车、骑车的原因,并用一个连接词组织补充细节。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people ride them to commute to work, especially in busy cities, because cycling is affordable and convenient. It can also be a good way to avoid traffic.

Ngữ pháp

ID 5: Past tense issue(过去时错误)

× Uh, I have a bike when I was a child.

✓ Uh, I had a bike when I was a child.

句子描述的是“小时候”的经历,时间在过去,因此主句动词也应使用过去式。have 的过去式是 had。

ID 1: Singular and plural issue(单复数问题)

× Yeah, I think, I think bag is pretty popular in my country.

✓ Yeah, I think bikes are pretty popular in my country.

这里是在泛指自行车这种交通工具,应使用复数 bikes,并与复数主语搭配使用 are。原句中的 bag 与问题语境不符;如果想表达“自行车很受欢迎”,应使用 bikes。

ID 11: Incorrect use of prepositions(介词使用错误)

× A lot of people ride bikes to onto their commute times and so many people ride bikes.

✓ A lot of people ride bikes to commute, and so many people ride bikes.

to 和 onto 不能在这里连用。表达“骑自行车通勤”时,可以用 to commute,表示“为了通勤”。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Long— Lengthy; Soon; Yearn for
Many— Numerous; A great/good deal of
Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
Pretty— Attractive; Quite; Beautify
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