Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 先直接回答问题，并注意使用过去时：用“didn’t have”而不是“don’t have”。“when I just entered the 18 years old”表达不自然，可改为“when I turned 18”。说明自行车是父母送的礼物即可；减少“uh”和重复表达，让答案更流畅、简洁。

Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. I got my first bicycle when I turned 18, as a gift from my parents.

Gợi ý: 开头直接回答时，应使用复数“bikes”，并说“in my hometown”，而不是“and my hometown”。说明骑车受欢迎的原因时，可以先讲家乡规模较小，再补充骑车能避开堵车、方便穿过狭窄街道。注意使用“get stuck in traffic”和“narrow streets”等自然表达，并避免重复或未完成的句子。

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my hometown, which is relatively small. Many people ride them because they’re convenient for short trips. They can also avoid traffic jams and get through the narrow streets more easily than cars.

× I don't have a bike when I was a child.

✓ I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

句子说的是“小时候”，属于过去的时间，因此应使用一般过去时。否定句要用“didn't + 动词原形”，所以将“don't have”改为“didn't have”。

× when I just entered the 18 years old

✓ when I had just turned 18

“enter the 18 years old”不是英语中表达年龄的正确结构。表示“刚满18岁”时，可以说“turn 18”；这里描述过去发生的事，因此用“had just turned 18”。

× I have my own bicycle

✓ I had my own bicycle

上下文描述的是过去发生的事，因此应把现在时“have”改为过去式“had”。

× but, from my parents

✓ but it was from my parents

“from my parents”在这里缺少谓语，不能独立构成完整分句。补上主语“it”和谓语“was”，句子结构才完整。

× they send me

✓ they gave it to me

这里描述父母过去送自行车作为礼物，应使用过去时。把现在时“send”改为过去时“gave”，并用“it”指代自行车。

× for a present

✓ as a present

表示“作为礼物”时，通常使用“as a present”，而不是“for a present”。

× a bike is pretty popular and my hometown

✓ a bike is pretty popular in my hometown

表达“在我的家乡”时，地点前应使用介词“in”。

× because there is a small hometown

✓ because my hometown is small

原句使用“there is”会变成“有一个小家乡”，不符合这里要表达的意思。要说明家乡面积小，应以“my hometown”为主语，并使用“is small”。

× ride a bike to go to anywhere

✓ ride a bike to go anywhere

“anywhere”本身可以表示“去任何地方”，前面不需要再加介词“to”。

× it may be some traffic jam

✓ there may be some traffic jams

表达“可能会有交通堵塞”时，应使用“there may be”结构；“it may be”不能直接接“some traffic jams”。另外，“some”后面应接可数名词复数“jams”。

× there are too many small way

✓ there are too many small roads

“many”后面要接可数名词复数，因此不能用单数“way”。这里改为复数“roads”，也更符合道路的语境。

× small way can just pass the bike

✓ small roads that bikes can pass through

原句中“small way”后直接接“can”，缺少连接定语从句的关系词；而且表达“自行车通过道路”时，应使用“pass through”。改为“roads that bikes can pass through”后，句子结构和表达关系更清楚。