Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes I have a bike when I am a child because my mom very love me and other child has the bike so she think I should have one.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, bags are very popular in my country. I am in China and in my country people always use bikes to go to the work and go to the school. Bike is usually transportation.

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.5Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 38.0

Gợi ý: 先直接回答“小时候有一辆自行车”,并使用过去时:have 应改为 had,am 应改为 was。表达“妈妈很爱我”可说“my mum loved me very much”;“其他孩子有自行车”可说“other children had bikes”。注意主谓一致和复数形式,并用 because 等连接词简洁说明原因。

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My mum bought it for me because she loved me and many of my friends had bikes too. I used to ride it around my neighborhood.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 45.0

Gợi ý: 开头应明确回答自行车是否受欢迎;“bags”应改为“bikes”。避免重复说“in my country”,并将“go to the work / go to the school”改为“go to work / go to school”。最后一句可改成更自然的表达,例如“Bikes are a common form of transportation”,并补充具体原因或场景。

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are still quite popular in China, especially in cities. Many people ride them to work or school because they are convenient and inexpensive. Bike-sharing services have also made cycling more accessible.

Ngữ pháp

5: Past tense issue(过去时错误)

× Yes I have a bike when I am a child because my mom very love me and other child has the bike so she think I should have one.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child because my mom loved me very much, and other children had bikes, so she thought I should have one.

这个回答是在描述童年经历,应使用过去时。have 应改为 had,am 应改为 was,has 应改为 had,think 应改为 thought。回答过去发生的事情时,要确保相关动词都使用过去时。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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