Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yeah, yeah, in my childhood I I have many bikes, but the best is my mini bikes bike because that is a very good to good to uh drive and uh, I will I will uh, I will do the drifts and uh, it's too good to drive and my child.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, definitely in in our in our country bikes is very popular and because many, many people work work with a bike and go go to the our works and there it's too good bike.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 35.0

Gợi ý: Answer directly using the past tense, since the question is about your childhood. Avoid repeating words and self-corrections, and use a clear name for the bike (for example, “a mini bike”). Add one specific detail about what you enjoyed doing with it. Keep the answer to two or three fluent sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a mini bike when I was a child. It was my favourite because it was easy to ride, and I loved practising little drifts with it.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: Start with a direct answer, then explain who uses bikes and why. Use the plural form “bikes are,” and say “ride bikes to work” rather than “work with a bike.” Avoid repeated words and give a specific reason, such as convenience or low cost.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. Many people ride them to work because they’re affordable and convenient, especially in busy cities where traffic can be heavy.

Ngữ pháp

5: Past tense issue

× In my childhood I I have many bikes.

✓ In my childhood, I had many bikes.

The question asks about the student’s childhood, so the past tense is needed. Use had instead of have when describing possession in the past.

1: Singular and plural issue

× my mini bikes bike

✓ my mini bike

The phrase refers to one bike, so bike should be singular. The repeated use of bikes and bike is also unnecessary.

5: Past tense issue

× the best is my mini bikes bike

✓ the best was my mini bike

The student is talking about a bike from childhood, so was is the appropriate past-tense form of is.

26: Sentence structure errors

× because that is a very good to good to drive

✓ because it was very good to ride

The original phrase has an incomplete structure: a good needs a noun after it, and the repeated words make the sentence unclear. Use very good to ride for a complete, natural structure. Was also keeps the description in the past.

5: Past tense issue

× I will do the drifts

✓ I used to do drifts

The student is describing a childhood habit, not a future action. Use used to do to describe something done regularly in the past.

26: Sentence structure errors

× it's too good to drive and my child

✓ It was great to ride when I was a child.

The original ends with my child, which does not complete the intended meaning. Use when I was a child to show when the experience happened, and use was for the past.

27: Subject-verb agreement errors

× bikes is very popular

✓ Bikes are very popular

Bikes is a plural subject, so it needs the plural verb are, not is.

11: Incorrect use of prepositions

× many people work with a bike

✓ many people commute by bike

Use by bike to describe the way people travel. With a bike usually means using or possessing a bike, rather than traveling by one.

17: Incorrect use of the definite article

× go to the our works

✓ go to work

Work does not take the in this expression, and our is not needed. The natural phrase is go to work.

12: Incorrect use of pronouns

× there it's too good bike

✓ They are very good bikes.

The student is referring to bikes, so use the plural pronoun they rather than it. The verb must also be plural: they are.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Best— Finest; To the highest standard
Good— Fine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
Many— Numerous; A great/good deal of
Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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