Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你直接回答了问题，也给出了原因，但时态和表达有明显错误。“when I was tried”不符合这里的意思；可以说“when I was a child”。描述过去的情况时要使用过去时，例如“didn’t have”和“couldn’t afford”。建议用一句话直接回答，再补充家庭当时买不起自行车这一原因。

Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because my family couldn’t afford one at the time.

Gợi ý: 你表达了自行车在本国很受欢迎，并尝试说明人们骑车锻炼，但回答有重复，且句子结构和语法错误较多。谈论现在的情况时用一般现在时，如“bikes are popular”和“people ride”。“to stay healthy”可表达骑车有益健康；“especially at weekends”比“specially in the weekend”更自然。建议删去重复的受欢迎这一观点，并用“because”连接原因。

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially at weekends. Many people ride them to parks because cycling is a convenient way to exercise and stay healthy.

× I don't have a bike when I was tried because that time my family was poor.

✓ I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my family was poor at that time.

这句话描述的是童年时的情况，应使用一般过去时。原句中的“don't have”是一般现在时，应改为“didn't have”。另外，“when I was tried”不符合“我小时候”的表达，应说“when I was a child”。

× I don't have a bike when I was tried because that time my family was poor.

✓ I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my family was poor at that time.

表示“在那个时候”时，通常说“at that time”，不能直接说“that time”。建议记住固定表达“at that time”。

× Yes, the bike was very popular.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular.

这里是在泛指自行车这一类事物，应使用复数“bikes”，而不是单数“the bike”。泛指一类可数名词时，通常用复数形式。

× Yes, the bike was very popular.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular.

考官询问自行车现在是否受欢迎，因此应使用一般现在时“are”，而不是过去时“was”。回答当前情况时，要让动词时态与问题的时间一致。

× As many people they take healthy, important, specially in the weekend.

✓ Many people think cycling is healthy and important, especially on weekends.

原句的结构不完整，“take healthy, important”也无法构成清楚的谓语和补语。可以用完整结构“Many people think cycling is healthy and important”表达“许多人认为骑自行车健康且重要”。

× As many people they take healthy, important, specially in the weekend.

✓ Many people think cycling is healthy and important, especially on weekends.

“many people”已经是主语，后面不需要再加“they”重复作主语。英语中通常直接说“Many people think...”，避免主语重复。

× As many people they take healthy, important, specially in the weekend.

✓ Many people think cycling is healthy and important, especially on weekends.

表示“在周末”时，通常使用“on weekends”或“at the weekend”，不说“in the weekend”。建议根据表达习惯选用固定搭配。

× Many people they riding bicycle to the park and make exercise.

✓ Many people ride bicycles to the park and exercise.

“Many people”已经是句子的主语，不应再用“they”重复。删除多余的代词后，句子结构会更清楚。

× Many people they riding bicycle to the park and make exercise.

✓ Many people ride bicycles to the park and exercise.

原句中的“they riding”缺少助动词，且表达一般性的习惯时应使用一般现在时“ride”。一般现在时中，主语“many people”搭配动词原形。

× Many people they riding bicycle to the park and make exercise.

✓ Many people ride bicycles to the park and exercise.

这里泛指人们骑自行车，通常用复数“bicycles”，而不是没有限定词的单数“bicycle”。