Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

No, I haven't have a bike when I was a child because my parents thought buying back is dangerous for me so they never bought a bike to me.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, bikes are so popular in my country, especially the electronic bikes, uh, for the reason is that is convenient and is eco-friendly.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.5Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 42.0

Gợi ý: 先直接回答问题,再补充原因。注意过去时应使用“didn’t have”,而不是“haven’t have”;“买自行车”应说“buy me a bike”或“buy a bike for me”,不是“buying back”或“to me”。建议用“because”连接原因,并避免把多个意思挤在一个长句里。

Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My parents thought it would be dangerous for me, so they never bought me one.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 58.0

Gợi ý: 回答清楚,也提到了电动自行车,但原因部分的句式不正确。“for the reason is that”可改为“because”;“electronic bikes”更自然的说法是“electric bikes”,并注意用“they are”指代复数的自行车。可以再补充一个具体场景,例如通勤或避开交通拥堵。

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, especially electric bikes. They’re convenient and eco-friendly, so many people use them to commute to work or school.

Ngữ pháp

5: Past tense issue(过去时错误)

× No, I haven't have a bike when I was a child because my parents thought buying back is dangerous for me so they never bought a bike to me.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my parents thought riding a bike was dangerous for me, and they never bought a bike for me.

这句话描述的是童年时的情况,应使用一般过去时。“haven't have”应改为“didn't have”;“thought”表示过去的想法,因此后面的“is”也应改为“was”。

16: Incorrect conjunction use(连词使用错误)

× No, I haven't have a bike when I was a child because my parents thought buying back is dangerous for me so they never bought a bike to me.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my parents thought riding a bike was dangerous for me, and they never bought a bike for me.

“because”和“so”不能在这个句子中同时用来连接同一组因果关系。保留“because”说明原因后,应删除“so”,并用“and”连接后面的并列信息。

11: Incorrect use of prepositions(介词使用错误)

× No, I haven't have a bike when I was a child because my parents thought buying back is dangerous for me so they never bought a bike to me.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my parents thought riding a bike was dangerous for me, and they never bought a bike for me.

表达“给某人买某物”时,通常说“buy something for someone”,因此“bought a bike to me”应改为“bought a bike for me”。

26: Sentence structure errors(句子结构错误)

× Yes, bikes are so popular in my country, especially the electronic bikes, uh, for the reason is that is convenient and is eco-friendly.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, especially electronic bikes, because they are convenient and eco-friendly.

“for the reason is that is convenient”结构不完整且表达不自然。“the reason is that”后面需要完整的从句,但原句缺少明确的主语。可直接用“because they are convenient and eco-friendly”说明原因;“they”指代复数的“bikes”。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Back— Rear; Reverse; Backward
Dangerous— Menacing; Hazardous
Friendly— Affable; Amicable; Favorable; Compatible
Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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