Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Luyện tậpPart12026-10-23 15:53:43

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I had. I enjoyed it the my whole childhood. I always rode the bike with my friends and we went to some nearby supermarkets to buy sweets.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, bikes are popular in my country. Um, many people it's like it's a common way to commute to work or school, uh, so they can save money for transportation and enjoy riding.

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Tổng: 5.5Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.5Phát âm: 5.5Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.5

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: Answer naturally with “Yes, I did” or “Yes, I had one.” Correct the phrase “throughout my childhood,” and use “my bike” rather than “the bike.” Your detail about riding with friends to buy sweets is specific and effective, so keep it and connect it smoothly to your main answer.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a bike throughout my childhood, and I often rode it with my friends. We sometimes cycled to nearby supermarkets to buy sweets.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 62.0

Gợi ý: Give a clear answer without fillers or repeated phrases such as “it’s like.” Say “many people use bikes” and “save money on transportation.” You could make your answer more specific by mentioning who uses bikes or why they are convenient.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among students and people who live close to work. They’re an affordable way to get around, and cycling can also be enjoyable and good exercise.

Ngữ pháp

26: Sentence structure errors

× Yes, I had.

✓ Yes, I did.

The question uses the past simple auxiliary did, so the short affirmative answer should use did as well. In short answers, repeat the auxiliary from the question: Did you have a bike? Yes, I did.

17: Incorrect use of the definite article

× I enjoyed it the my whole childhood.

✓ I enjoyed it my whole childhood.

The definite article the should not come before the possessive determiner my. Use either my whole childhood or the whole of my childhood.

26: Sentence structure errors

× Um, many people it's like it's a common way to commute to work or school, uh, so they can save money for transportation and enjoy riding.

✓ Um, many people use bikes as a common way to commute to work or school, so they can save money for transportation and enjoy riding.

The phrase many people it's like it's combines incomplete, conflicting clause structures. Make many people the subject and use the verb use to complete the clause. Removing the false start also makes the sentence clearer.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Many— Numerous; A great/good deal of
Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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