Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

I have a bicycle when I was a child and I used to go to school by it.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, every children in my country use bicycle to go to school.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: Bạn trả lời đúng trọng tâm và có thêm thông tin về việc dùng xe đạp để đi học. Tuy nhiên, hãy dùng thì quá khứ nhất quán: đổi “have” thành “had”. Cụm “go to school by it” chưa tự nhiên; nên nói “ride it to school”. Có thể bổ sung một chi tiết cụ thể, chẳng hạn bạn thường đạp xe cùng ai hoặc cảm thấy thế nào.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child, and I often rode it to school. I usually went with a couple of friends, so the journey was fun.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: Bạn đã trả lời trực tiếp, nhưng cần sửa lỗi ngữ pháp: “every children” nên là “every child” hoặc “many children”, và cần dùng “bicycles” hoặc “a bicycle”. Tránh khẳng định quá rộng rằng tất cả trẻ em đều đi xe đạp; hãy dùng cách diễn đạt thận trọng hơn, ví dụ “many children”. Bạn cũng có thể nêu thêm lý do hoặc địa điểm cụ thể để câu trả lời thuyết phục hơn.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in smaller towns. Many children ride bicycles to school because it is affordable and convenient, although some travel by bus.

Ngữ pháp

5: Past tense issue

× I have a bicycle when I was a child and I used to go to school by it.

✓ I had a bicycle when I was a child, and I used to go to school on it.

The phrase when I was a child refers to a completed period in the past, so use the past-tense verb had instead of have. Keep the verbs in the past tense when describing this past experience.

11: Incorrect use of prepositions

× I have a bicycle when I was a child and I used to go to school by it.

✓ I had a bicycle when I was a child, and I used to go to school on it.

When referring to riding a bicycle, the natural preposition is on: go to school on it. By is used in expressions such as by bicycle, without a pronoun.

1: Singular and plural issue

× Yes, every children in my country use bicycle to go to school.

✓ Yes, every child in my country uses a bicycle to go to school.

Every must be followed by a singular countable noun, so change children to child. Remember to use the singular form after every.

2: Third person singular issue

× Yes, every children in my country use bicycle to go to school.

✓ Yes, every child in my country uses a bicycle to go to school.

Every child is grammatically singular, so the present-tense verb needs the third-person singular ending: uses. Check that the verb agrees with the subject.

22: Article errors

× Yes, every children in my country use bicycle to go to school.

✓ Yes, every child in my country uses a bicycle to go to school.

Bicycle is a singular countable noun, so it needs an article. Use a before bicycle when referring to any bicycle.

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