Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Well I don't think I had a bicycle when I was a child cause umm I have problem umm keeping balance so it cost it cost me too much time till learn how to ride the bicycle.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Well, I'd say it was a thing in the past, but now people usually tend to, uh, drive electric electric electronic bicycles more than the traditional ones.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 48.0Gợi ý: 先直接回答是否有自行车,再说明原因。注意语法:用“had trouble keeping my balance”,而不是“have problem keeping balance”;描述过去经历时用过去时,例如“it took me”;“直到学会骑车”可说“to learn how to ride one”。删去重复词和填充词,并补充一个具体结果,让回答更自然、连贯。
Ví dụ: I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because I had trouble keeping my balance. It took me a long time to learn how to ride one, so I rarely rode a bike.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答时要明确说明现在自行车是否受欢迎,避免“it was a thing in the past”指代不清。注意“骑自行车”应使用“ride”,而不是“drive”;“electric electric electronic”有重复且表达不准确,可简化为“electric bikes”。可以补充一个具体原因或场景,例如通勤方便、适合短途出行。
Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are still popular in my country, especially electric bikes. Many people ride them for short commutes because they’re convenient and cheaper to run than cars.
× I have problem.
✓ I have a problem.
可数名词单数 problem 前通常需要冠词。这里应在 problem 前加不定冠词 a。
× I have problem keeping balance.
✓ I had a problem keeping my balance.
这句话描述的是小时候的情况,因此应使用过去时 had,而不是现在时 have。用 my balance 表达“保持平衡”也更自然。
× It cost me too much time till learn how to ride the bicycle.
✓ It took me a long time to learn how to ride a bicycle.
“till learn”结构不完整:till/until 后通常接主语和谓语,不能直接接动词原形。表达“花了很长时间做某事”时,可以使用“It took me a long time to do something”。