Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes of course I had. Back when I was child my dad bought a pink bike for me as my birthday after I really like it and I always took a roll, took a road every day.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

I think so because our country, uh, recommended us uh, green roll, green bicycle and green routine. So, uh, we prefer buying a bike to uh, uh, take ride from home.

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 45.0

Gợi ý: 先直接回答问题,再补充一两个具体细节。注意语法:应说“I had one”,而不是“I had”;“when I was a child”前要加冠词;表达“作为生日礼物”用“as a birthday present”。描述过去的喜好和习惯时使用过去时,例如“liked”和“rode”。“take a roll/take a road”不自然,可用“go for a ride”或“ride it around”。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. My dad bought me a pink bike for my birthday when I was a child. I loved it and used to ride it around my neighborhood every day.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 35.0

Gợi ý: 开头可以直接回答“是的,我认为很受欢迎”,然后用清楚的原因和例子支持观点。避免重复和过多填充词(如“uh”)。你想表达的可能是环保出行,建议使用“encourage people to cycle”和“a greener way to travel”。注意搭配:说“ride a bike”或“go for a ride”,不要说“take ride”;也可以具体说明骑车适合短途通勤。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. The government encourages people to cycle because it is a greener way to travel. Also, bikes are convenient for short trips, especially when the traffic is heavy.

Ngữ pháp

22: Article errors(冠词错误)

× Back when I was child

✓ Back when I was a child

child 是可数名词单数,前面通常需要冠词。这里应在 child 前加不定冠词 a。

11: Incorrect use of prepositions(介词使用错误)

× My dad bought a pink bike for me as my birthday.

✓ My dad bought a pink bike for me for my birthday.

表达“为了庆祝某人的生日”时,通常使用 for my birthday,而不是 as my birthday。

5: Past tense issue(过去时错误)

× After I really like it

✓ After I really liked it

这段内容是在讲童年时发生的事情,叙述时态是过去时,因此 like 应改为过去式 liked。

6: Present tense issue(现在时错误)

× Our country recommended us ...

✓ Our country recommends us ...

这里是在说明目前普遍存在的情况,应使用一般现在时。主语 our country 是第三人称单数,因此动词 recommend 应加 -s,改为 recommends。

8: Verb + -ing form(动词 + -ing 形式)

× We prefer buying a bike to take ride from home.

✓ We prefer buying a bike to taking a ride from home.

在 prefer doing A to doing B 结构中,to 是介词,后面的动词应使用 -ing 形式。因此 take 应改为 taking。

22: Article errors(冠词错误)

× We prefer buying a bike to take ride from home.

✓ We prefer buying a bike to take a ride from home.

ride 在这里是可数名词单数,前面需要冠词 a。

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