Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I did. I had a pink little bike when I was twelve years old that was that was my birthday gift from my dad.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Not really because not really and
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 72.0Gợi ý: 回答直接,也补充了自行车的颜色、年龄和来源,信息具体。注意避免重复“that was”,并把“pink little bike”改成更自然的语序“little pink bike”。可以再补充一句你当时如何使用这辆自行车,让回答更完整。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a little pink bike when I was twelve. It was a birthday present from my dad, and I used to ride it around our neighborhood.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 20.0Gợi ý: 回答没有完成,重复了“not really”,也没有说明原因,因此内容不够清楚。先直接回答是否流行,再用一个具体原因或例子支持观点;回答时避免停在“and”这样的未完成连接词上。
Ví dụ: Not really, especially in big cities. Many people prefer cars or public transport because the roads can be busy, and there are not always safe bike lanes.
× I had a pink little bike when I was twelve years old that was that was my birthday gift from my dad.
✓ I had a little pink bike when I was twelve years old. It was a birthday gift from my dad.
英语中多个形容词通常按“大小在颜色前”的顺序排列,因此应说“a little pink bike”,而不是“a pink little bike”。原句中的“that was that was”是口语重复,不属于所列语法问题;修改后的句子将重复部分整理为独立句,使表达更清晰。
× Not really because not really and
✓ Not really.
原回答以“and”结尾,句子没有完成,结构不完整。若想表达“不太受欢迎”,可以直接说“Not really.”;如果想补充原因,则需要在“because”后说出完整原因。