Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It's my mom buy for me. And I often ride my bike in the park.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Uh, yes, because in the in the road, I can see, uh, many people ride a bike, go to the. School or go to the subway anywhere because it's convenient.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 你能直接回答问题,并补充了谁送你自行车以及在哪里骑车,内容相关。不过,“It's my mom buy for me”有明显的时态和句子结构错误,应改为“My mom bought it for me”;描述童年经历时,建议统一使用过去时,例如把“ride”改为“rode”。另外,可以用“and”自然连接补充信息,避免单独用“And”开头。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. My mom bought me a bike when I was a child, and I often rode it in the park near my home.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 52.0Gợi ý: 你表达了“自行车很受欢迎”这一观点,也给出了通勤方便的理由,但回答中有重复和停顿词(如“in the in the”“uh”),影响流畅度。“in the road”不自然,可改为“on the roads”;描述普遍现象时用“ride bikes”,并把上学和去地铁站的例子组织成完整句子。建议先直接回答,再用“because”说明原因,最后补充具体出行场景。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. You can often see people riding them to school or to the subway station because they are convenient, especially for short journeys.
× It's my mom buy for me.
✓ My mom bought it for me.
这句话描述的是童年时发生的事情,应使用过去时。buy 的过去式是 bought;同时应将 it 放在动词后指代自行车。建议先明确句子的主语和动作,例如“My mom bought it for me.”
× And I often ride my bike in the park.
✓ And I often rode my bike in the park.
问题问的是你小时候的情况,因此这里描述的是过去的习惯,应使用 ride 的过去式 rode。建议根据问题的时间背景统一使用过去时。
× Uh, yes, because in the in the road, I can see, uh, many people ride a bike, go to the. School or go to the subway anywhere because it's convenient.
✓ Uh, yes, because on the road, I can see, uh, many people ride a bike, go to school, or go to the subway anywhere because it's convenient.
表示在道路上时,通常使用介词 on,而不是 in,因此应说“on the road”。建议记住常见搭配“on the road”。
× Uh, yes, because in the in the road, I can see, uh, many people ride a bike, go to the. School or go to the subway anywhere because it's convenient.
✓ Uh, yes, because on the road, I can see, uh, many people ride a bike, go to school, or go to the subway anywhere because it's convenient.
泛指去上学时,school 前通常不加 the,应说“go to school”。如果指某一所特定的学校,才可以说“go to the school”。