Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I have a bike when I was young and I loves bicycling, umm, everywhere, because I think it's interesting and it's healthy. It's useful for me to keep fit. Yeah, it's a healthy way.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, it's popular because everyone in my country, in Suzhou, in Shanghai, they all think riding bicycles, it's popular now and it's umm, it's a less common way to keep fit.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: 先直接回答问题,并注意过去时:用“had”而不是“have”,用“loved”而不是“loves”。“when I was young”和“when I was a child”意思重复,可删去其一。后面的“healthy”重复出现,可以补充一个具体细节,例如你通常在哪里骑车或骑车时做什么。

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, and I loved riding it around my neighborhood. It was a fun way to explore the area and get some exercise.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 42.0

Gợi ý: 开头直接回答“Bikes are quite popular”,并避免重复“popular”。注意主谓一致:“bikes”对应“they”,不要说“it’s popular”。“less common”表示“不太常见”,与前面的“popular”矛盾;如果想表达流行,应改为“a common way”。可以举出具体原因或例子,例如城市里的自行车道或共享单车。

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities like Suzhou and Shanghai. Many people use them for short journeys because they are convenient and a good way to stay active.

Ngữ pháp

5: Past tense issue

× Yes, I have a bike when I was young and I loves bicycling, umm, everywhere, because I think it's interesting and it's healthy.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was young and I loves bicycling, umm, everywhere, because I think it's interesting and it's healthy.

这里的“when I was young”指过去的时间,因此描述当时拥有自行车应使用一般过去时“had”,而不是现在时“have”。

27: Subject-verb agreement errors

× Yes, I have a bike when I was young and I loves bicycling, umm, everywhere, because I think it's interesting and it's healthy.

✓ Yes, I have a bike when I was young and I love bicycling, umm, everywhere, because I think it's interesting and it's healthy.

主语“I”是第一人称单数,谓语动词不应加第三人称单数词尾“-s”。应将“loves”改为“love”。

26: Sentence structure errors

× Yes, it's popular because everyone in my country, in Suzhou, in Shanghai, they all think riding bicycles, it's popular now and it's umm, it's a less common way to keep fit.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular because people in my country, including those in Suzhou and Shanghai, think that riding bicycles is popular now, and it is a less common way to keep fit.

原句中“think riding bicycles, it's popular now”把两个句子不恰当地用逗号连接,且“think”后面的内容缺少清晰的从句结构。可用“think that...”引出从句,并补上“riding bicycles is popular now”,使句子结构完整、清楚。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Fit— Suitable; Healthy; Equip; Join; Match
Healthy— Well; Health-giving
Interesting— Absorbing
Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
Useful— Functional; Beneficial
Young— Youthful; Immature; Fledgling; Offspring; Young people
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