Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 先直接回答“小时候有自行车”，再补充骑车的时间或是谁买的。注意使用过去时：have 应改为 had，ride（骑）不能用 control，bought（买）不能用 bite；“当我11岁时”可说 when I was 11。建议控制在两句左右，并加入一个具体细节，例如你常在哪里骑车。

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My father bought it for me, and I rode it around my neighborhood until I was about 11.

Gợi ý: 回答观点后，要清楚说明自行车在不同城市的普及程度可能不同，并给出合理、具体的对比。注意主谓一致和表达方式：可用 popularity varies from city to city；避免“provides many people”这类意思不清的表达。如果想对比汽车和自行车，请明确说明人们在什么情况下选择哪种交通方式。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular, especially in cities with bike lanes and short commuting distances. However, their popularity varies from place to place, and in areas where people need to travel long distances, many may prefer to drive.

× Yes, I have a bike when a children but I control it until I 11 years old.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, but I controlled it until I was 11 years old.

这句话描述的是童年时期的经历，应使用过去时。have 应改为 had，control 应改为 controlled；“I 11 years old”缺少谓语动词，应补上 was。

× Yes, I have a bike when a children but I control it until I 11 years old.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, but I controlled it until I was 11 years old.

a 后面应接单数可数名词，不能接复数 children。此处应使用 a child。

× My first bike bite from my father.

✓ My first bike was bought by my father.

表示“买”的过去分词是 bought，不是 bite。这里描述的是自行车被父亲买来，因此应使用过去分词 bought。

× My first bike bite from my father.

✓ My first bike was bought by my father.

句子的主语是自行车，是“被父亲买”的对象，因此应使用被动语态：be 动词 + 过去分词。此处应为 was bought，并用 by 引出动作执行者。

× But in different city it's have different popularity such as in Inner Mongolia provides many people. Take the car.

✓ But bikes have different levels of popularity in different cities. For example, in Inner Mongolia, many people take cars.

different cities 泛指不同的城市，city 应使用复数形式 cities。这里谈论的是多个城市中的自行车受欢迎程度，因此应使用复数。

× But in different city it's have different popularity such as in Inner Mongolia provides many people. Take the car.

✓ But bikes have different levels of popularity in different cities. For example, in Inner Mongolia, many people take cars.

原句中的 it's have 结构不正确。若主语是复数 bikes，谓语应使用 have，不能使用 it's（it is 的缩写）。建议先明确句子的主语，再选择与主语一致的动词。

× But in different city it's have different popularity such as in Inner Mongolia provides many people. Take the car.

✓ But bikes have different levels of popularity in different cities. For example, in Inner Mongolia, many people take cars.

“such as in Inner Mongolia provides many people”缺少清晰、完整的句子结构；“Take the car.”在这里也与前文衔接不完整。可用 For example 引出完整例子，并按“地点 + 主语 + 谓语”的顺序表达：in Inner Mongolia, many people take cars。