Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I had a bike and I was child. I used to ride it with my friends. It was a lot of friends.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, my country is popular bike because easy easy or travelling and I was child I was

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 38.0

Gợi ý: Answer directly, and use the correct phrase “when I was a child” rather than “I was child.” The final sentence is unclear; explain where or with whom you rode your bike. Add one specific detail, such as where you went, and avoid repeating the same idea.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I often rode it with my friends around our neighborhood after school. It was a simple bike, but I really enjoyed using it.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 20.0

Gợi ý: Give a clear answer using the structure “Bikes are popular in my country.” Explain why with a complete sentence, for example, because they are convenient for short trips. Avoid repeating “easy,” and finish your thought instead of adding the incomplete phrase “I was child I was.”

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because they are convenient for short trips. Many people use them to commute to work or run errands, especially in busy cities. They are also an affordable way to get around.

Ngữ pháp

Article errors

× Yes, I had a bike and I was child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike, and I was a child.

Use the indefinite article a before the singular countable noun child. In English, a singular countable noun generally needs an article or another determiner.

There be issue

× It was a lot of friends.

✓ There were a lot of friends.

Use there were to say that people existed or were present. The plural noun friends requires were, not was. If you meant to say that you had many friends, say I had a lot of friends instead.

Sentence structure errors

× Yes, my country is popular bike because easy easy or travelling and I was child I was

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country because they make traveling easy. When I was a child, ...

The original wording does not form a clear, complete sentence: bikes, rather than the country, are popular, and the reason needs a subject and verb. The ending I was is incomplete, so its intended meaning cannot be corrected without more context. Use a complete clause after When I was a child.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Easy— Uncomplicated; Docile; Vulnerable; Leisurely
Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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