Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Definitely. When I was young, I really read the bags.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yeah, definitely. You know, oh these days lot of case of like two red bags of in the road or in the park they definitely enjoy
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: 开头的“Definitely”直接回答了问题,但“read the bags”意思不清,可能是想说“ride a bike”。请用正确表达补充一条具体信息,例如你几岁开始骑车、在哪里骑,或骑车时的感受。
Ví dụ: Definitely. I had a bike when I was a child, and I often rode it around my neighbourhood after school. It was a fun way to spend time with my friends.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 20.0Gợi ý: 先明确回答“自行车在你们国家是否流行”,再说明原因并给出具体场景。当前回答中“lot of case”“two red bags”等表达难以理解;注意使用完整句子,并用“for example”或“because”连接细节。
Ví dụ: Yes, definitely. Bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities. For example, many people cycle to work or ride along park paths at the weekend because it is convenient and good exercise.
× Yeah, definitely. You know, oh these days lot of case of like two red bags of in the road or in the park they definitely enjoy
✓ Yeah, definitely. You know, these days there are a lot of cases of, like, two red bags on the road or in the park, and they definitely enjoy them.
表达某处“有”某物时,可以使用“There be”结构。这里需要补上“There are”,因为后面提到的是复数名词。“bags”是复数,因此使用“are”而不是“is”。
× Yeah, definitely. You know, oh these days lot of case of like two red bags of in the road or in the park they definitely enjoy
✓ Yeah, definitely. You know, these days there are a lot of cases of, like, two red bags on the road or in the park, and they definitely enjoy them.
“a lot of”后面应接可数名词的复数形式,所以“case”应改为“cases”。注意区分单数和复数名词,并确保名词与句意一致。
× Yeah, definitely. You know, oh these days lot of case of like two red bags of in the road or in the park they definitely enjoy
✓ Yeah, definitely. You know, these days there are a lot of cases of, like, two red bags on the road or in the park, and they definitely enjoy them.
表示物体位于道路或公园的表面时,使用介词“on”。原句中的“of in”不能这样连用,应改为“on the road or in the park”。
× Yeah, definitely. You know, oh these days lot of case of like two red bags of in the road or in the park they definitely enjoy
✓ Yeah, definitely. You know, these days there are a lot of cases of, like, two red bags on the road or in the park, and they definitely enjoy them.
原句的多个短语直接连在一起,缺少清晰的主谓结构和连接词,导致句子不完整、难以理解。可用“There are...”构成完整句子,并用“and”连接后面的分句。