Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I had bite when I was a child. It was gifted by my parents in my 10th birthday. It was very beautiful and I used to drove in my neighborhood.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, bikes are popular in my country since there is heavy traffic in my country and also it is very economical and conventional to use bike over a car.

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.5Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: Answer directly, then add one or two relevant details. Correct the key language errors: say “bike,” not “bite”; “was given to me on my tenth birthday,” not “gifted … in my birthday”; and “used to ride,” not “used to drove.” Use “rode around my neighborhood” to describe where you cycled naturally.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents gave it to me on my tenth birthday, and I was really excited about it. I used to ride it around my neighborhood after school.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 62.0

Gợi ý: Give a clear answer and support it with the reasons you already mention. Avoid repeating “in my country,” use “convenient” rather than “conventional,” and say “bikes are more economical and convenient than cars.” You could also clarify whether you mean bicycles or motorbikes if that is relevant.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in busy cities. They’re more economical and convenient than cars because they cost less to run and are easier to use in heavy traffic.

Ngữ pháp

11: Incorrect use of prepositions

× It was gifted by my parents in my 10th birthday.

✓ It was gifted by my parents on my 10th birthday.

Use on with a specific date or birthday. In is used for longer periods, such as months or years. A more natural phrasing would be: My parents gave it to me on my 10th birthday.

4: Modal verb usage

× It was very beautiful and I used to drove in my neighborhood.

✓ It was very beautiful, and I used to drive in my neighborhood.

After used to, use the base form of the verb. Therefore, drove should be drive. Drove is the simple past form and does not follow used to.

22: Article errors

× Yes, bikes are popular in my country since there is heavy traffic in my country and also it is very economical and conventional to use bike over a car.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country since there is heavy traffic in my country, and it is also very economical and conventional to use a bike over a car.

Bike is a singular countable noun, so it needs an article. Use a before bike when referring to one nonspecific bike.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Beautiful— Attractive
Heavy— Weighty; Overweight; Forceful; Arduous; Onerous
Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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