Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 先直接回答问题，再按时间顺序讲学习骑车的经历。注意过去经历要使用过去时，例如 learned、pushed、felt、shouted。避免重复或中途改句；“hold on to the back”比“hold your hands on the back”更自然。结尾要完整，不要以 but 戛然而止。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I learned to ride a bike when I was about eight. My mom pushed me from behind, and I remember feeling nervous. I shouted, “Mom, don’t let go—keep holding the back of the bike!”

Gợi ý: 观点明确，也提供了原因和例子，但要检查词语和句子是否完整：“bags”应为“bikes”，“back parking areas”可改为“bike-parking areas”。描述普遍情况时用一般现在时（can afford），并补全最后一句的主语和宾语，例如说明自行车方便学生和上班族通勤。

Ví dụ: Yes, bicycles are very popular in China because they’re convenient and affordable. In many cities, you can see lots of bikes parked near supermarkets and subway stations. There are usually designated bike-parking areas. They’re especially useful for students and office workers who need a convenient way to get around.

× Yes I did I learned to ride a bike when I was about 8.

✓ Yes, I did. I learned to ride a bike when I was about 8.

原句把两个完整句子直接连在一起，形成连写句。回答后应使用句号分开，并在“Yes”后加逗号。

× My mom told me I first she pushed me from behind and I still remember I'm feeling nervous and screaming to her mom do not leave me alone just keep your hands hold on the back but.

✓ My mom told me that at first, she pushed me from behind. I still remember feeling nervous and screaming to her, “Mom, don’t leave me alone. Just keep holding on to the back of the bike.”

“my mom told me I first she pushed me”中句子成分和语序混乱，应改为“told me that at first, she pushed me”。原句还把多个意思不同的分句连在一起，建议拆分，并用引号标出当时说的话。

× I still remember I'm feeling nervous and screaming to her mom do not leave me alone just keep your hands hold on the back but.

✓ I still remember feeling nervous and screaming to her, “Mom, don’t leave me alone. Just keep holding on to the back of the bike.”

表示“记得曾经做过某事”时，remember 后面用动词 -ing 形式，因此应说“remember feeling”，而不是“remember I'm feeling”。“keep”表示继续做某事时也接动词 -ing 形式，应说“keep holding”。

× I still remember I'm feeling nervous and screaming to her mom do not leave me alone just keep your hands hold on the back but.

✓ I still remember feeling nervous and screaming to her, “Mom, don’t leave me alone. Just keep holding on to the back of the bike.”

固定搭配是“hold on to something”，表示“抓住某物”，所以应说“hold on to the back of the bike”，不能省略“to”。

× Yes, bicycles are very popular in China because it is convenient and inexpensive, so many people could afford them.

✓ Yes, bicycles are very popular in China because they are convenient and inexpensive, so many people can afford them.

“bicycles”是复数，后面应使用复数代词“they”，并搭配“are”，不能使用单数代词“it”。

× Yes, bicycles are very popular in China because it is convenient and inexpensive, so many people could afford them.

✓ Yes, bicycles are very popular in China because they are convenient and inexpensive, so many people can afford them.

这里描述的是现在普遍存在的情况，应使用“can”表示人们有能力负担自行车。 “Could”通常表示过去的能力或较委婉的可能性，不适合此处的一般事实。

× In addition, makes it easier for students and office.

✓ In addition, bicycles make it easier for students and office workers to get around.

原句缺少主语，且“for students and office”中的并列内容不完整。应补上主语“bicycles”，并将“office”改为指人的“office workers”，使句子结构完整、意思清楚。