Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

When I was a child, I rode a bike almost every day. It was very common for kids where I grew up, and I especially enjoyed reading with my friends to the park.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yeah, uh, bicycles are very popular, popular where I live. I live in the sports, uh, city of Kislavodsk. So, uh, people cycle a lot of both sports and everyday transport. And there are frequent cycling events. I see many cyclists on the street every day.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 5.5Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 5.5Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 5.5

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 68.0

Gợi ý: Your answer responds directly and includes a relevant detail. However, “reading with my friends to the park” does not fit the meaning; use “riding to the park with my friends.” Add a specific detail, such as where you went or what you did there, and keep the answer concise.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I rode my bike almost every day because most children in my neighbourhood had one. I especially enjoyed riding to the park with my friends and exploring the trails there.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: You give several relevant reasons and examples, but repeated words and fillers (“uh,” “popular, popular”) make the answer less fluent. Use a more natural phrase such as “a popular destination for sports,” and correct “cycle a lot of both sports and everyday transport” to “cycle for both sport and everyday transport.” Connect your points smoothly and avoid repeating the same idea.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in Kislovodsk, which is known for outdoor activities. People cycle both for exercise and as a convenient way to get around. There are also regular cycling events, so I often see cyclists on the streets.

Ngữ pháp

11: Incorrect use of prepositions

× So, uh, people cycle a lot of both sports and everyday transport.

✓ So, uh, people cycle a lot, both for sport and for everyday transport.

The phrase 'a lot of' is not appropriate here because 'of' does not correctly connect 'cycle a lot' to the activities that follow. Use 'for' to explain the purposes of cycling. The revised sentence also uses 'both ... and ...' to connect the two purposes clearly.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Many— Numerous; A great/good deal of
Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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