Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country. I live in Kyoto. Many people use bikes for daily activity, for example, commuting to work or shopping because the country is compass.

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: 質問には直接答えられていますが、質問文をそのまま繰り返すだけで、回答が少し短く感じられます。子どもの頃にどのように自転車を使っていたか、またはどんな自転車だったかを一つ加えると、より自然で具体的になります。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bike when I was a child, and I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 45.0

Gợi ý: 自転車が人気だという意見に加え、京都での具体例を挙げている点はよいです。ただし、「for daily activity」は「for daily activities」または「in their daily lives」が自然です。また、「the country is compass」は意味が伝わりにくいため、「the country is compact(国土がコンパクト)」など、意図に合う表現に直しましょう。京都の街の特徴と自転車の利用をつなげると、回答に一貫性が生まれます。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in Japan, especially in Kyoto. The city is relatively flat, and many people use bicycles for commuting or shopping. They’re often a convenient way to get around.

Ngữ pháp

Singular and plural issue (ID 1)

× Many people use bikes for daily activity, for example, commuting to work or shopping because the country is compass.

✓ Many people use bikes for daily activities, for example, commuting to work or shopping because the country is compass.

Daily activity refers to one activity, but the examples describe several types of activity. Use the plural activities. The phrase because the country is compass contains a word-choice issue, which is not included in the provided grammar problem types, so it has not been corrected.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Many— Numerous; A great/good deal of
Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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