Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I have a bike when I was a child. The bike is my father both for me. I like it very much. I always ride this bike with my friends after my school.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, I think the bike is very popular in our country because many people will buy bike to go to work or go to school. Usually many median median uh many people will ride back go to school.

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 45.0

Gợi ý: 先直接回答问题,并统一使用过去时描述童年经历:用 “I had” 而不是 “I have”。“The bike is my father both for me”表达不清楚;如果想说“爸爸买给我的”,应说 “My father bought it for me”。可以补充一个具体细节,例如骑车的地点或感受。注意说 “after school”,不需要加 my。

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My father bought it for me, and I loved riding it with my friends after school. We often rode around our neighborhood.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 38.0

Gợi ý: 回答观点后,用一到两个清楚的理由展开即可,避免重复表达“很多人骑车上学”,也尽量避免填充词和重复词。谈论普遍情况时用一般现在时;注意名词复数和搭配,例如 “bikes are popular” 和 “ride bikes to work or school”。可以补充骑车方便或省钱等具体原因。

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people ride them to work or school because they are convenient and inexpensive. They are especially common for short journeys.

Ngữ pháp

5: Past tense issue

× Yes, I have a bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

句子中的“when I was a child”说明这是过去的情况,因此应使用一般过去时。“have”的过去式是“had”。

26: Sentence structure errors

× The bike is my father both for me.

✓ My father bought the bike for me.

原句的词语顺序和结构不完整,无法清楚表达意思。可以改为“My father bought the bike for me”,即“我父亲给我买了这辆自行车”。

5: Past tense issue

× I always ride this bike with my friends after my school.

✓ I always rode this bike with my friends after school.

这段话描述的是小时候的经历,因此应使用一般过去时。“ride”的过去式是“rode”。

22: Article errors

× I always ride this bike with my friends after my school.

✓ I always rode this bike with my friends after school.

表示放学后这一日常活动时,通常说“after school”,不在“school”前加“my”。

1: Singular and plural issue

× Yes, I think the bike is very popular in our country because many people will buy bike to go to work or go to school.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are very popular in our country because many people will buy bikes to go to work or school.

这里泛指自行车这一类事物,应使用复数“bikes”,并与复数主语搭配使用“are”。“many people”后泛指多辆自行车时,也应使用复数“bikes”。

6: Present tense issue

× Usually many median median uh many people will ride back go to school.

✓ Usually, many people ride bikes to school.

“Usually”表示通常发生的习惯性行为,宜使用一般现在时“ride”,而不是“will ride”。描述一般规律或习惯时,可使用“usually + 一般现在时”。

26: Sentence structure errors

× Usually many median median uh many people will ride back go to school.

✓ Usually, many people ride bikes to school.

“ride back go to school”的动词结构不正确,且“back”在这里不能连接“ride”和“go”。可以用“ride bikes to school”直接表达“骑自行车上学”。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Back— Rear; Reverse; Backward
Many— Numerous; A great/good deal of
Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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