Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Did you have a bike when you're child?

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, in my country it's popular the bike. The people like riding the bike around the garden.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 10.0

Gợi ý: 你没有回答考官的问题,而是重复了问题;同时,“when you're child”语法不正确,应说“when you were a child”。先直接回答“是”或“不是”,再补充一两个具体细节,例如自行车的样子、骑车的地点或你的感受。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bike, and I used to ride it around my neighborhood with my friends.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: 你表达了自行车受欢迎这一观点,但句子结构不自然。“Bikes are popular”比“it's popular the bike”更准确;泛指人群时通常说“People”,不加“The”。“around the garden”可能不够贴切,可以说明人们在哪里骑车、为什么骑,或举出具体例子。

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in smaller towns. People often ride them in parks or along riverside paths because cycling is a convenient way to get around and stay active.

Ngữ pháp

5: Past tense issue(过去时错误)

× Did you have a bike when you're child?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

问题发生在过去,when 引导的时间从句也应使用过去时。应将 you're(you are)改为 were。

22: Article errors(冠词错误)

× Did you have a bike when you're child?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

child 是可数名词单数,前面通常需要冠词。这里应使用不定冠词 a,表达“一个孩子”。

26: Sentence structure errors(句子结构错误)

× Yes, in my country it's popular the bike.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country.

原句中 it's popular the bike 的语序不正确。表达“自行车很受欢迎”时,可以让 bikes 作主语,并将 are popular 放在主语之后。

1: Singular and plural issue(单复数错误)

× Yes, in my country it's popular the bike.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country.

这里是在泛指自行车这种交通工具,应使用复数 bikes,而不是单数 the bike。泛指复数名词时通常不加 the。

1: Singular and plural issue(单复数错误)

× The people like riding the bike around the garden.

✓ People like riding bikes around the garden.

这里泛指人们和自行车,应使用 people 和 bikes,不需要用 the 来特指某些人或某一辆自行车。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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