Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
yes, when I was a child I have a red bag and this bike is named Goodboy Good Boy Brand And I really like it and I ride it back every days. When I was young, I learned
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Well, I think bikes is popular in my country, China because because the bike is one of the transportation in my country in our daily life and everybody needs
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: 回答与问题相关,但“red bag”与自行车的关系不清楚,建议确认是否想说“red bike”。注意讲过去经历时使用过去时,例如“I had”“I rode”“I learned”;“every days”应改为“every day”。避免重复名称,并补全最后一句。可以先直接回答,再用一两句补充自行车的颜色、名字或骑车经历。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a red bike called Goodboy, and I loved riding it around my neighborhood. I learned to ride it when I was quite young.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 42.0Gợi ý: 回答切题,但“bikes is”主谓不一致,应改为“bikes are”;“because”重复,且“one of the transportation”表达不自然,可说“a common form of transportation”。句子末尾“everybody needs”没有说完。建议先明确表明观点,再解释自行车在日常生活中的用途,并补充具体例子。
Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in China because they’re a convenient and affordable way to get around. Many people use them for short trips, such as commuting to work or going to nearby shops.
× yes, when I was a child I have a red bag and this bike is named Goodboy Good Boy Brand And I really like it and I ride it back every days.
✓ Yes, when I was a child, I had a red bag, and this bike was named Goodboy Good Boy Brand. I really liked it, and I rode it back every day.
这段话描述的是童年经历,应用过去时。表示“有”应将 have 改为 had;描述自行车当时的名称,应将 is named 改为 was named;描述当时的喜好和骑车行为,应将 like 改为 liked、ride 改为 rode。讲述过去发生的事情时,注意保持动词时态一致。
× I ride it back every days.
✓ I rode it back every day.
every 后面接可数名词单数,因此应使用 day,而不是复数 days。可记住结构 every + 单数名词,例如 every day、every week。
× Well, I think bikes is popular in my country, China
✓ Well, I think bikes are popular in my country, China.
主语 bikes 是复数,因此 be 动词应使用 are,而不是 is。检查主谓一致时,先确认主语是单数还是复数,再选择对应的动词形式。
× the bike is one of the transportation in my country
✓ the bike is one of the means of transportation in my country
one of 后面通常接复数可数名词。transportation 通常是不可数名词,不能直接说 one of the transportation。可以改成 one of the means of transportation,其中 means 是复数形式。