Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes I did it was a pink and lovely bike. It has a lot of cute patterns and barriers on it. I really love it and read it every day to school. Including the weekend, I always read it.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, it's very popular. Almost my every classmates ride bikes to school and there are lots of share bikes on the street. People go to work, use it very useful and cheap.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 42.0Gợi ý: 先直接回答,再补充一两个具体细节即可。注意使用过去时:小时候的自行车应说“was”,过去经常骑应说“rode”。“read”是“阅读”,这里应为“ride”;“barriers”意为“障碍物”,可改为“patterns”或“decorations”。“every day to school”可改为“to school every day”,并用“even on weekends”表达“甚至周末也骑”。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. It was a lovely pink bike with cute patterns on it. I rode it to school every day, even on weekends.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 开头直接回答并使用复数形式:“Bikes are very popular.” 注意主谓一致和表达习惯:“almost my every classmates”应改为“almost all of my classmates”;“share bikes”应为“shared bikes”。最后一句需要明确说明自行车为什么受欢迎,可说“People use them to commute because they’re convenient and affordable”。
Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Almost all of my classmates ride them to school, and you can see lots of shared bikes on the streets. Many people also use bikes to commute because they’re convenient and affordable.
× Yes I did it was a pink and lovely bike.
✓ Yes, I did. It was a pink and lovely bike.
原句把两个完整句子直接连在一起,形成句子结构错误。应在“Yes, I did”后用句号分开,并在“Yes”后加逗号。
× Yes I did it was a pink and lovely bike.
✓ Yes, I did. It was a lovely pink bike.
英语中表达观点或评价的形容词通常放在表示颜色的形容词之前。因此应说“lovely pink bike”,而不是“pink and lovely bike”。
× It has a lot of cute patterns and barriers on it.
✓ It had a lot of cute patterns and barriers on it.
这句话讲的是小时候拥有的自行车,时间背景是过去,因此应使用一般过去时“had”,而不是一般现在时“has”。
× I really love it and read it every day to school.
✓ I really loved it and read it every day to school.
这句话描述的是过去对童年自行车的感受,所以“love”应改为过去式“loved”。
× Yes, it's very popular.
✓ Yes, they are very popular.
问题问的是复数名词“bikes”,所以回答时应使用复数代词“they”和复数动词“are”,不能用单数“it’s”。
× Almost my every classmates ride bikes to school
✓ Almost all my classmates ride bikes to school.
“Almost my every classmates”不是自然或正确的数量表达。表示“几乎我所有的同学”应使用“almost all my classmates”。
× there are lots of share bikes on the street.
✓ There are lots of shared bikes on the street.
这里需要用过去分词“shared”作形容词,表示“共享的自行车”。“share”是动词原形,不能直接放在这里修饰“bikes”。
× People go to work, use it very useful and cheap.
✓ People use bikes to go to work because they are very useful and cheap.
原句中“use it very useful and cheap”的结构不完整:动词“use”不能直接连接形容词“useful”。可以改为“they are useful”,并用“because”清楚表达原因。
× People go to work, use it very useful and cheap.
✓ People use bikes to go to work because they are very useful and cheap.
这里指的是复数的自行车,因此应使用复数代词“they”,而不是单数代词“it”。