Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Uh, I uh, in my chalu time I have uh, I have a bike bike. To do you have a bike on your child? In my childhood time, uh, on that time I was a child, I was uh, I on that time I.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

India is a diverse country, umm bikes are very popular in my country. Uh so so many people ride a bi bikes uh according to me people has own choice, uh own choice uh to ride the bikes.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 15.0

Gợi ý: Answer directly using the past tense: “Yes, I did” or “No, I didn’t.” Use “when I was a child” rather than “in my childhood time,” and avoid repeating phrases or asking the examiner the question again. Add one relevant detail, such as where you rode the bike or who gave it to you.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small blue bike that my parents bought for me. I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 45.0

Gợi ý: Your answer addresses the question, but make the grammar more accurate: say “many people ride bikes” and “people have their own choice.” Avoid repeating “own choice”; instead, explain briefly why bikes are popular or give a specific example. Use a linking phrase such as “For example” to connect your supporting detail.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in India. Many people use them because they are affordable and convenient, especially for short trips in busy cities. For example, students often ride bicycles to school.

Ngữ pháp

5: Past tense issue

× Uh, I uh, in my chalu time I have uh, I have a bike bike.

✓ Uh, when I was a child, I had a bike.

The question asks about a past period in your life, so use the past-tense verb had rather than have. The repeated words and unclear term chalu are not addressed as grammar errors.

26: Sentence structure errors

× To do you have a bike on your child?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

The original question has an incorrect auxiliary sequence. For a yes-or-no question about the past, put did before the subject and use the base form have.

11: Incorrect use of prepositions

× To do you have a bike on your child?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

On your child is not the correct phrase for referring to the time when someone was young. Use when you were a child to describe that period.

11: Incorrect use of prepositions

× In my childhood time, uh, on that time I was a child, I was uh, I on that time I.

✓ When I was a child, I had a bike.

Use when I was a child or during my childhood to refer to this period. On that time is incorrect; at that time is possible, but when I was a child sounds more natural here.

27: Subject-verb agreement errors

× According to me people has own choice.

✓ In my opinion, people have their own choice.

People is a plural subject, so it takes have, not has.

12: Incorrect use of pronouns

× According to me people has own choice.

✓ In my opinion, people have their own choice.

Use the possessive determiner their before own choice to show that the choice belongs to the people. In my opinion is also the natural expression for introducing a personal view.

22: Article errors

× People has own choice uh own choice to ride the bikes.

✓ People have their own choice about riding bikes.

When referring to bikes in general, do not use the before the plural noun bikes. The is used when referring to specific bikes.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Many— Numerous; A great/good deal of
Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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