Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Answer directly first, for example, “No, I didn’t.” Use “buy me a bike” rather than “owned me a bike,” and say “afraid I might have an accident” instead of “afraid from a good accident.” The rural-versus-urban point is unclear, so focus on one relevant reason and clarify that you rode a bike at your grandparents’ home. Use “ride a bike,” not “drive a bike,” and keep the answer concise.

Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My father was worried that I might have an accident, so he never bought me one. However, I used to ride a bike whenever I visited my grandparents.

Gợi ý: Give a clear answer and explain why bikes are popular using natural, accurate phrases. Use “many people” rather than “many peoples,” and avoid repeating “Moreover.” Replace the unclear phrase “going somewhere into four vehicles” with a relevant comparison, such as commuting by car. Also, “easy to travel for two people” is confusing; specify whether you mean that a bike is convenient for an individual or for carrying a passenger.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in busy cities. Many people use them for short commutes because they are affordable and easier to park than cars. They’re also a convenient way to avoid traffic.

× Particularly, no, I think that when I was young, my father never owned me a bike because he was very afraid from a good accident.

✓ Particularly, no, I think that when I was young, my father never owned me a bike because he was very afraid of a good accident.

The adjective afraid is followed by the preposition of, not from. Use afraid of when describing what someone fears.

× And, uh, living in a rural or urban areas, uh, it's very difficult to drive a bike in urban areas and I, whenever I go to my grandparents home, I always ride a bike.

✓ And, uh, living in a rural or urban area, uh, it's very difficult to drive a bike in urban areas and I, whenever I go to my grandparents home, I always ride a bike.

The singular article a must be used with a singular noun. Since the sentence refers to either one rural area or one urban area, use area, not areas.

× Absolutely, as many peoples own their own bikes.

✓ Absolutely, as many people own their own bikes.

People is already the plural form of person in this context. Do not add -s to make it plural; peoples usually refers to distinct ethnic or national groups.

× Moreover, they always feel that it is easy to commute rather than going somewhere into four vehicles.

✓ Moreover, they always feel that it is easy to commute rather than go somewhere into four vehicles.

The infinitive to commute is contrasted with the alternative action. Keep the verb forms parallel by using go rather than going.

× Moreover, they always feel that it is easy to commute rather than going somewhere into four vehicles.

✓ Moreover, they always feel that it is easy to commute rather than going somewhere in four vehicles.

Use in, not into, to describe traveling inside a vehicle. Into usually describes movement from outside to inside.

× Moreover, I think that it is such a great choice of having their own personal vehicles because they are readily and easily to travel for two people's.

✓ Moreover, I think that it is such a great choice of having their own personal vehicles because they can travel readily and easily with two people.

The structure they are ... to travel is not grammatical here. Use can travel to express ability, followed by the adverbs readily and easily. For example, say they can travel easily.