Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I have, it's been very beautiful.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, in my country very people very very many people like a bike.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: 回答童年经历时要用过去时:把“I have”改为“I did”或“Yes, I had one”。描述自行车时可用“it was beautiful”,但最好补充一个具体细节,例如颜色或骑车的经历。注意用自然的句子连接补充信息。
Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was bright red, and I loved riding it around my neighborhood.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 先直接回答问题,然后说明哪些人喜欢骑自行车或他们骑车的原因。表达“很多人”可用“many people”或“a lot of people”;谈论自行车作为一类交通工具时用复数“bikes”,不要说“a bike”。避免重复使用“very”,并注意句子语序。
Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people ride them to work or school because they are affordable and convenient, especially in crowded cities.
× Yes, I have, it's been very beautiful.
✓ Yes, I did. It was very beautiful.
问题询问的是你小时候是否有自行车,时间明确在过去,因此回答应使用一般过去时。用 did 回答 Did you...,并将 has been 改为 was。
× Yes, in my country very people very very many people like a bike.
✓ Yes, many people in my country like bikes.
原句中“very people”和重复的“very very many people”使句子结构混乱。very 不能直接修饰 people;可用 many people 表示“许多人”,并将地点短语 in my country 放在自然的位置。
× Yes, in my country very people very very many people like a bike.
✓ Yes, many people in my country like bikes.
这里表达的是许多人普遍喜欢自行车,并非喜欢某一辆特定的自行车,因此应使用复数 bikes。表达一般类别时,通常使用可数名词的复数形式。