Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Absolutely. Uh, when I was primary school students, I, I bought a bike and my parent, uh, told me that I need to learn how to use bike to go to school alone.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Absolutely. My country, uh-huh. My country has a projector and uh, uh, who's named uh, short bar back. People can scam the QR, uh, QR code to uh, to, to use show back. So I think uh backs is popular in our country.

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: 回答切题,也提到了父母让你学骑车的原因。注意语法:可以说“when I was in primary school”,不要说“when I was primary school students”;“my parent”若指父母双方,应使用“my parents”;讲过去的经历时,使用过去时“needed”。避免重复和过多填充词,并补充一个具体细节,例如你是否真的骑车上学。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was in primary school, and my parents encouraged me to learn how to ride it so I could cycle to school by myself. I was a little nervous at first, but I soon got used to it.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 30.0

Gợi ý: 你表达了“自行车很受欢迎”的观点,也尝试用扫码租车来解释,但部分词语难以理解,影响了答案的清晰度。先直接回答问题,再用准确词汇说明“共享单车”(shared bikes)和“扫描二维码”(scan a QR code);不要重复句子开头或使用过多填充词。可以补充共享单车方便、价格便宜等具体原因。

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially shared bikes. People can scan a QR code with their phones to unlock one, which makes short journeys around the city quick and convenient.

Ngữ pháp

1: Singular and plural issue(单复数问题)

× When I was primary school students, I, I bought a bike and my parent, uh, told me that I need to learn how to use bike to go to school alone.

✓ When I was a primary school student, I bought a bike, and my parent told me that I needed to learn how to use a bike to go to school alone.

主语是 I,后面的身份名词应使用单数 student,而不是复数 students。描述自己小时候的身份时,应说 a primary school student。

22: Article errors(冠词错误)

× When I was primary school students, I, I bought a bike and my parent, uh, told me that I need to learn how to use bike to go to school alone.

✓ When I was a primary school student, I bought a bike, and my parent told me that I needed to learn how to use a bike to go to school alone.

可数名词 student 和 bike 在这里是单数,前面需要冠词。应说 a primary school student 和 use a bike。

24: Direct and indirect speech errors(直接引语和间接引语错误)

× When I was primary school students, I, I bought a bike and my parent, uh, told me that I need to learn how to use bike to go to school alone.

✓ When I was a primary school student, I bought a bike, and my parent told me that I needed to learn how to use a bike to go to school alone.

主句中的 told 描述的是过去发生的事情,因此间接引语中的 need 通常也要随之退回过去式 needed。

27: Subject-verb agreement errors(主谓一致错误)

× So I think uh backs is popular in our country.

✓ So I think bikes are popular in our country.

这里谈论的是复数 bikes,因此谓语动词应使用 are,而不是 is。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Back— Rear; Reverse; Backward
Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
Short— Concise; Brief; Scarce; Briefly
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