Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I had a bag when I was younger. It was a burst gift from my mother when I was about six years old and I really love it because it company with my childhood.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, it's quite popular in my country, not only in Norwich but also in but also be before because it's a it's a basic transportation

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 35.0

Gợi ý: Answer the question directly and make sure you use the correct noun: “bike,” not “bag.” Use natural phrases such as “a birthday present” and “it reminds me of my childhood.” Add one clear supporting detail, and check verb tense and grammar (for example, “I loved it” and “it accompanied me”).

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My mother gave it to me for my sixth birthday, and I loved riding it around our neighbourhood. It brings back happy memories of my childhood.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 25.0

Gợi ý: Give a direct answer using “bikes are quite popular,” then support it with one clear reason or example. Avoid repeating “but also” and unfinished phrases. You could explain that bikes are affordable, convenient, or useful for short journeys, and use a linking word such as “because.”

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities such as Norwich. They’re an affordable and convenient way to travel short distances, and they can help people avoid traffic.

Ngữ pháp

5: Past tense issue

× I really love it because it company with my childhood.

✓ I really loved it because it accompanied me throughout my childhood.

The answer refers to a bike from the speaker’s childhood, so the past-tense form loved is more consistent with the past context. Accompanied is also the correct past-tense verb form; company is a noun and cannot function as the verb here.

27: Subject-verb agreement errors

× Yes, it's quite popular in my country, not only in Norwich but also in but also be before because it's a it's a basic transportation.

✓ Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because they are a basic means of transportation.

The question asks about bikes, which is plural, so the answer should use the plural verb are and the pronoun they rather than it's. The original also contains repetitions and an unclear, incomplete phrase; this correction expresses the clear intended idea in a complete sentence.

22: Article errors

× Yes, it's quite popular in my country, not only in Norwich but also in but also be before because it's a it's a basic transportation.

✓ Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because they are a basic means of transportation.

Transportation is generally an uncountable noun, so it should not be preceded directly by a. The phrase a basic means of transportation is grammatical because means is a countable noun.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Old— Elderly; Dilapidated; Worn; Antique; Mature
Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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