Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My mother brought it for me when I was thirteen and I and I learned to ride quickly. I used to ride it to the school every day because

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Well, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because they are cheap and convenient and they help people avoid traffic. For example, many students and office workers often use shared bikes to travel short distance.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 5.5Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.5Phát âm: 5.5Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: 回答切题,但最后的 because 没有后续原因,句子不完整;“brought it for me”应改为“bought it for me”,“I and I”是重复表达,“to the school”通常简化为“to school”。建议补充一个具体原因或骑车体验,并确保句子完整。

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My mother bought it for me when I was thirteen, and I learned to ride it quite quickly. I used to cycle to school every day because it was faster than walking.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 75.0

Gợi ý: 回答直接,理由和例子也比较清楚。可以用连接词让多个理由更自然,例如用“and”或“as a result”组织内容;“travel short distance”应改为“travel short distances”。也可以补充一个具体场景,让例子更生动。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because they’re affordable and convenient. They also help people avoid traffic, especially during rush hour. For example, many students and office workers use shared bikes to travel short distances between home, bus stops, and their workplaces.

Ngữ pháp

17: Incorrect use of the definite article(定冠词使用错误)

× I used to ride it to the school every day because

✓ I used to ride it to school every day because

表示去学校上学或进行日常活动时,school 前通常不加定冠词 the,因此应说“ride it to school”。

1: Singular and plural issue(单复数问题)

× For example, many students and office workers often use shared bikes to travel short distance.

✓ For example, many students and office workers often use shared bikes to travel short distances.

这里泛指人们骑共享单车出行的各种短距离,distance 应使用复数形式 distances。也可以说“to travel a short distance”,但此处用复数更符合泛指语境。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Cheap— Inexpensive; Poor-quality; Miserly; Despicable; Ashamed
Many— Numerous; A great/good deal of
Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
Short— Concise; Brief; Scarce; Briefly
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