Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

No, I didn't have any bike when back in my childhood because I'm not very fond of driving bike or scooty or bicycle as I am very scared of this type of activities. So I didn't own any bike as a child.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. I am from India and been a developing country. Many people cannot afford a four wheel wheeler like car. So in my country, bike is very popular.

Đánh giá

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: Answer directly, then give one clear reason. Use “ride a bike” rather than “drive a bike,” and say “when I was a child” instead of “when back in my childhood.” Avoid repeating that you did not own a bike, and explain briefly what made you nervous.

Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because I was afraid of falling off. I usually walked or got a ride from my parents instead.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 52.0

Gợi ý: Give a direct answer and support it with a specific reason. Correct the grammar in “India and been a developing country”; for example, say “India is a developing country.” Use “four-wheeled vehicle” or simply “car,” and make “bikes” plural when speaking generally. Avoid repeating that bikes are popular.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in India. Since cars can be expensive to buy and maintain, many people choose motorcycles or scooters as an affordable way to travel, especially in busy cities.

Ngữ pháp

Sentence structure errors (ID 26)

× No, I didn't have any bike when back in my childhood because I'm not very fond of driving bike or scooty or bicycle as I am very scared of this type of activities.

✓ No, I didn't have any bike when I was a child because I'm not very fond of riding a bike, a scooter, or a bicycle, as I am very scared of these types of activities.

The phrase 'when back in my childhood' is not a complete or grammatical time expression. Use 'when I was a child' to state when this happened. The correction also addresses the other grammar issues in this sentence.

Article errors (ID 22)

× No, I didn't have any bike when back in my childhood because I'm not very fond of driving bike or scooty or bicycle as I am very scared of this type of activities.

✓ No, I didn't have any bike when I was a child because I'm not very fond of riding a bike, a scooter, or a bicycle, as I am very scared of these types of activities.

Singular countable nouns such as 'bike,' 'scooter,' and 'bicycle' generally need an article when used this way. Use 'a bike,' 'a scooter,' and 'a bicycle.'

Singular and plural issue (ID 1)

× No, I didn't have any bike when back in my childhood because I'm not very fond of driving bike or scooty or bicycle as I am very scared of this type of activities.

✓ No, I didn't have any bike when I was a child because I'm not very fond of riding a bike, a scooter, or a bicycle, as I am very scared of these types of activities.

The singular demonstrative 'this' and singular noun 'type' do not agree with the plural noun 'activities.' Use 'these types of activities' for plural agreement, or 'this type of activity' in the singular.

Sentence structure errors (ID 26)

× I am from India and been a developing country.

✓ I am from India, and it is a developing country.

The phrase 'been a developing country' has no subject or auxiliary verb. Use 'it is' to make a complete clause referring to India.

Article errors (ID 22)

× Many people cannot afford a four wheel wheeler like car.

✓ Many people cannot afford a four-wheeled vehicle like a car.

The singular countable noun 'car' needs an article here, so use 'a car.'

Singular and plural issue (ID 1)

× So in my country, bike is very popular.

✓ So in my country, bikes are very popular.

The sentence refers to bikes as a general category, so use the plural noun 'bikes' and the plural verb 'are.'

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Back— Rear; Reverse; Backward
Many— Numerous; A great/good deal of
Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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