Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I have a bite when I wear when I'm away 50 the begin. I don't I don't now go by but my mom does.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, by a very popular in my country. Many people use them to work or school because they are cheap and convenient. For example, I often see a crowded by land during those hours.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 25.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời hiện chưa rõ ý do có nhiều từ/cụm từ khó hiểu và lặp lại, nên giám khảo khó xác định bạn đã có xe đạp khi còn nhỏ hay chưa. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp bằng thì quá khứ (“Yes, I did”) rồi thêm một chi tiết cụ thể, chẳng hạn bạn bắt đầu đi xe khi bao nhiêu tuổi hoặc ai đã dạy bạn. Nếu muốn nói hiện nay không còn đi xe, hãy diễn đạt riêng bằng câu rõ ràng như “I don’t ride one anymore.”
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was about five, and my father taught me how to ride it. I don’t ride much now, but my mother still uses her bike.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 62.0Gợi ý: Bạn trả lời đúng trọng tâm và đã đưa ra lý do cùng ví dụ, nhưng cần sửa cấu trúc câu mở đầu thành “Bikes are very popular” và dùng “to get to work or school”. Cụm “a crowded by land” chưa tự nhiên; có thể nói “crowded bike lanes” hoặc “busy roads with lots of cyclists”. Hãy dùng từ nối để ví dụ liên kết rõ với lý do, chẳng hạn “For instance”.
Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. Many people use them to get to work or school because they’re affordable and convenient. For instance, the bike lanes are often crowded during rush hour.
× Yes, I have a bite when I wear when I'm away 50 the begin.
✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.
The question asks about the student's childhood, so the answer should use the past tense. Use had instead of have and was instead of wear. The phrase in the original after wear is unclear, so the correction uses the context of the question.
× Yes, by a very popular in my country.
✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country.
The original sentence does not contain a clear subject and linking verb. Use the plural subject bikes with are before the adjective popular.