Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yeah, but when I was a child, umm, it's difficult for me to riding the bike and so I can't ride bike until I was in my senior school.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

MMM that depends on the situation. I live in the university so for university students on we always ride bike to go for class.

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 52.0

Gợi ý: 先直接回答小时候有没有自行车,再说明自己学骑车的困难和开始会骑的时间。注意时态一致:讲过去用“it was difficult”“I couldn’t”;“difficult”后接“to ride”,而不是“for me to riding”。表达“骑自行车”时说“ride a bike”。

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike as a child, but I found it difficult to ride at first. I didn’t learn properly until I was in senior high school.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: 回答要明确说明自行车在你所在国家是否流行,再用具体场景解释。你可以说“在大学校园里很常见”,并补充学生骑车上课的原因。注意说“on campus”而不是“in the university”,以及“ride bikes to class”而不是“ride bike to go for class”。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular, especially on university campuses. Many students ride them to class because it’s a convenient way to get around.

Ngữ pháp

8: Verb + -ing form(动词+-ing形式错误)

× it's difficult for me to riding the bike

✓ it was difficult for me to ride a bike

“to”后面应接动词原形,不能接动词-ing形式,因此“to riding”应改为“to ride”。

5: Past tense issue(过去时态错误)

× it's difficult for me to riding the bike and so I can't ride bike until I was in my senior school.

✓ It was difficult for me to ride a bike, so I couldn't ride a bike until I was in high school.

这段话描述的是童年经历,应用过去时。“it's”应改为“it was”,“can't”应改为“couldn't”,以与过去的时间背景保持一致。

22: Article errors(冠词错误)

× I can't ride bike

✓ I couldn't ride a bike

“bike”是可数名词单数,前面需要冠词。此处可用“a”,说“a bike”。

11: Incorrect use of prepositions(介词使用错误)

× I live in the university so for university students on we always ride bike to go for class.

✓ I live on campus, so university students always ride bikes to class.

表示住在大学校园里,通常说“live on campus”;“on”在“students”后面多余;表示去上课应说“go to class”或直接说“ride bikes to class”,不说“go for class”。

1: Singular and plural issue(单复数问题)

× we always ride bike

✓ we always ride bikes

这里泛指大学生通常骑自行车,复数名词“bikes”更合适。也可以用单数表达“ride a bike”,但不能直接说“ride bike”。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Difficult— Hard; Troublesome; Inconvenient
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