Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Definitely yes. I have a bike when I was a child and I used to ride a bike after school with my brother and sister.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because you can see a lot of public bikes that everyone can use and you can see many people ride the bike on the street.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.5Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 74.0

Gợi ý: 回答直接,也补充了和兄弟姐妹放学后骑车的具体细节。注意回忆过去时,应该把“I have”改为“I had”;后半句重复使用“a bike”,可以用代词或更自然的表达替换。

Ví dụ: Definitely. I had a bike when I was a child, and I often rode it after school with my brother and sister. We usually cycled around our neighbourhood for fun.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: 观点明确,并用公共自行车和街上骑车的人作了说明。不过,“you can see”重复,句子略显冗长;“many people ride the bike”应改为“many people ride bikes”。可以补充一个具体原因,例如共享单车方便、适合短途出行。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. Shared bikes are easy to find in many cities, so people often use them for short trips or to get to a bus or subway station. They’re also a convenient way to avoid traffic.

Ngữ pháp

5: Past tense issue(过去时错误)

× I have a bike when I was a child.

✓ I had a bike when I was a child.

句子描述的是“小时候”的经历,时间在过去,因此应使用一般过去时。have 的过去式是 had。

1: Singular and plural issue(单复数问题)

× You can see many people ride the bike on the street.

✓ You can see many people ride bikes on the street.

这里泛指许多人在街上骑自行车,并不是指某一辆特定的自行车,所以应使用复数 bikes。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Many— Numerous; A great/good deal of
Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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