Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 先直接回答过去是否有自行车，避免“Yes, I have I did”这种时态和表达混乱。讲童年经历时用过去时：用“when I was a child”而不是“when I was a children”；“骑自行车”应说“ride a bike”，过去时为“rode a bike”。补充一个具体细节即可，例如你通常骑车去哪里。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. When I was a child, my father bought me a beautiful bike. I usually rode it to school, and I really enjoyed the ride.

Gợi ý: 先用完整句直接表达观点，例如“Bikes are quite popular in my country”。注意“ride bike”前要加冠词，通常说“riding a bike”；“绿色交通方式”可表达为“an environmentally friendly form of transport”。后面用清楚的连接词说明原因，并准确表达“成本低于其他交通方式”，避免含义不清的“popular to air one under”。

Ví dụ: Yes, definitely. Bikes are quite popular in my country because they are an environmentally friendly and affordable way to get around. They are especially useful for short trips, and they cost less to use than cars or public transport.

× Yes, I have I did.

✓ Yes, I did.

问题问的是小时候是否有自行车，属于过去的经历，应使用一般过去时。回答“Yes, I have I did”混用了现在完成时助动词“have”和过去时助动词“did”，且重复表达；直接说“Yes, I did”即可。

× When I was a children, my father bought a beautiful bike for me.

✓ When I was a child, my father bought a beautiful bike for me.

“a”后面应接单数可数名词。“children”是“child”的复数形式，因此应改为“a child”。

× so I usually write is to school

✓ So I usually rode it to school.

这句话继续描述小时候的习惯，应使用过去时。“write”应改为表示骑车的过去式“rode”。建议描述过去的日常习惯时使用一般过去时。

× so I usually write is to school

✓ So I usually rode it to school.

这里需要用代词指代前文的自行车，作“rode”的宾语时应使用宾格“it”。“is”不能在这里代替“it”。

× Yes, definitely ride bike is a green transport way.

✓ Yes, definitely. Riding a bike is a green way to travel.

“骑自行车”在句中作主语时，动词应使用动名词形式“riding”，而不是动词原形“ride”。可以用“Riding a bike”作句子的主语。

× Yes, definitely ride bike is a green transport way.

✓ Yes, definitely. Riding a bike is a green way to travel.

“bike”是单数可数名词，前面需要冠词。这里泛指骑自行车，可说“a bike”。

× So it is popular to air one under the cost is lower than other transportation.

✓ So it is popular to ride one because the cost is lower than that of other forms of transportation.

原句中“under the cost is lower”不能构成正确的因果结构。表达“因为费用更低”时，应使用“because”引导原因从句，并将比较对象补充完整。

× So it is popular to air one under the cost is lower than other transportation.

✓ So it is popular to ride one because the cost is lower than that of other forms of transportation.

“cost”应与其他交通方式的“cost”比较，不能直接与“transportation”（交通方式）比较。用“that of”代替前面重复的“the cost”，并用“other forms of transportation”明确比较对象。