Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

No, whenever trial my my home is poorer I don't have extra money to buy mobile.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, bikes is so popular in my country and in China industry there has a lot of Xiao Huang Che and Halo mobile.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 20.0

Gợi ý: 回答没有直接表达清楚,且“whenever trial”“my home is poorer”和“buy mobile”不符合这里的语境。请直接说明小时候有没有自行车,再用一个具体原因补充;这里应说“bike”而不是“mobile”。注意使用完整、自然的句子,并检查语法。

Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My family didn’t have much money, so we couldn’t afford one.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 38.0

Gợi ý: 你表达了自行车在中国很受欢迎,也提到了共享单车,这是相关的具体例子。不过,“bikes is”应改为“bikes are”;“in China industry there has”表达不自然,可改为“there are many”。建议先直接回答,再用共享单车说明原因,并将品牌或名称说清楚,例如“Hello bikes”。

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in China, especially in cities. There are many shared bikes, such as Hello bikes, which people can rent using a mobile app. They’re convenient for short trips.

Ngữ pháp

26: Sentence structure errors(句子结构错误)

× No, whenever trial my my home is poorer I don't have extra money to buy mobile.

✓ No, when I was a child, my family was poor, so I didn't have extra money to buy a bike.

“whenever trial”没有构成正确的从句,无法清楚表达“小时候”。这里可用“when I was a child”。此外,原句中重复的“my”应删除。建议按照“时间从句 + 主句 + 结果”的结构组织回答。

5: Past tense issue(过去时态错误)

× No, whenever trial my my home is poorer I don't have extra money to buy mobile.

✓ No, when I was a child, my family was poor, so I didn't have extra money to buy a bike.

问题询问的是小时候的情况,因此应使用过去时。“is”应改为“was”,“don't have”应改为“didn't have”。描述过去的经历时,要确保相关动词都与过去时间一致。

27: Subject-verb agreement errors(主谓一致错误)

× Yes, bikes is so popular in my country and in China industry there has a lot of Xiao Huang Che and Halo mobile.

✓ Yes, bikes are so popular in my country, and in China's industry there are a lot of Xiao Huang Che and Halo mobiles.

主语“bikes”是复数,所以动词应使用“are”,不能用“is”。建议先判断主语是单数还是复数,再选择相应的动词形式。

3: There be issue(There be句型错误)

× Yes, bikes is so popular in my country and in China industry there has a lot of Xiao Huang Che and Halo mobile.

✓ Yes, bikes are so popular in my country, and in China's industry there are a lot of Xiao Huang Che and Halo mobiles.

表达“有很多……”时应使用“There are”,不能说“there has”。由于后面的内容表示复数,需用“There are a lot of...”。

1: Singular and plural issue(单复数错误)

× Yes, bikes is so popular in my country and in China industry there has a lot of Xiao Huang Che and Halo mobile.

✓ Yes, bikes are so popular in my country, and in China's industry there are a lot of Xiao Huang Che and Halo mobiles.

“a lot of”后面表示多个可数事物时,名词应使用复数形式。因此,“mobile”应改为“mobiles”。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Extra— Additional; Exceptionally; In addition; Addition; Walk-on
Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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