Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

No, I don't have a bike when I was child, but now I have a cycle. It is very helpful for my daily life.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, bike are popular in my country because lots of people use it and it is very useful for their daily life because in Dhaka city there is lots of traffic problem and when they use bike it's allowed to reduce traffic jam like they use another.

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 48.0

Gợi ý: Answer directly using the past tense: “I didn’t have a bike when I was a child.” Use “as a child” or “when I was a child,” and keep “bike” consistent rather than switching to “cycle.” Add one specific detail about how you use your bike now.

Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. I got one a few years ago, and now I use it to run short errands around my neighborhood.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 38.0

Gợi ý: Use the plural form consistently: “bikes” and “them.” Avoid repeating “because”; instead, connect your reason with “especially since” or “as.” Explain clearly how bikes help people travel through traffic, and remove the unclear ending “like they use another.”

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in Bangladesh, especially in Dhaka. Since the city often has heavy traffic, people use bikes to get around more easily and sometimes avoid long delays.

Ngữ pháp

Past tense issue

× No, I don't have a bike when I was child, but now I have a cycle.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child, but now I have a cycle.

The question asks about the past, so use the past form didn't have rather than don't have. Use didn't + the base form have.

Article errors

× No, I don't have a bike when I was child, but now I have a cycle.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child, but now I have a cycle.

Child is a singular countable noun, so it needs an article. Say a child.

Singular and plural issue

× Yes, bike are popular in my country because lots of people use it and it is very useful for their daily life because in Dhaka city there is lots of traffic problem and when they use bike it's allowed to reduce traffic jam like they use another.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country because lots of people use them, and they are very useful in their daily lives. In Dhaka City, there are lots of traffic problems, and using bikes helps reduce traffic jams compared with using other vehicles.

Use the plural form bikes when speaking generally about bicycles. Also, traffic problems and traffic jams need plural forms in this context. When referring to people’s individual lives, daily lives is the natural plural form.

Incorrect use of pronouns

× Yes, bike are popular in my country because lots of people use it and it is very useful for their daily life because in Dhaka city there is lots of traffic problem and when they use bike it's allowed to reduce traffic jam like they use another.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country because lots of people use them, and they are very useful in their daily lives. In Dhaka City, there are lots of traffic problems, and using bikes helps reduce traffic jams compared with using other vehicles.

The pronouns it and they should agree in number with the plural noun bikes. Use them as the object of use and they as the subject of are.

There be issue

× In Dhaka city there is lots of traffic problem.

✓ In Dhaka City, there are lots of traffic problems.

Use there are with a plural noun phrase. Since lots of traffic problems is plural, the correct form is there are, not there is.

Sentence structure errors

× When they use bike it's allowed to reduce traffic jam like they use another.

✓ Using bikes helps reduce traffic jams compared with using other vehicles.

The original clause does not clearly connect its ideas, and it's allowed to reduce is not the appropriate structure for expressing that bikes help reduce congestion. Use helps reduce, followed by the base verb, and use compared with to make the comparison clear.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
Useful— Functional; Beneficial
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