Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I did. The bike was my father bought for me and the colour is red I like it very much

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because you can see lots of people riding bikes on the streets in the morning and I go to school by bike too

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 5.5Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.5Phát âm: 5.5Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.5

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: 你直接回答了问题,也提到了自行车的颜色和你对它的喜爱。不过,“The bike was my father bought for me”语法错误;可说“my father bought it for me”。注意用过去时描述童年经历,并用连接词把信息连起来。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. My father bought me a red bike when I was a child, and I loved riding it around my neighbourhood.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 72.0

Gợi ý: 回答切题,并用街上骑车的人和自己的经历支持观点。建议用句号或连接词拆分较长的句子,避免重复使用“bike”;还可以补充骑车受欢迎的具体原因,例如方便或经济。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. You can see many people cycling to work or school in the morning. They’re convenient and affordable, and I used to ride one to school too.

Ngữ pháp

21: Incorrect passive voice

× The bike was my father bought for me

✓ The bike was bought for me by my father

这里想表达“自行车是爸爸买给我的”,需要使用被动语态:主语“The bike”后接“was + 过去分词 bought”,再用“by my father”说明动作的执行者。

5: Past tense issue

× the colour is red I like it very much

✓ the colour was red, and I liked it very much

回答描述的是童年时的自行车,与过去的时间背景一致,因此应将“is”改为“was”,将“like”改为“liked”。连接两个分句时可加“and”,并使用逗号。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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