Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
I used a header back when I was a child. My parents brought it for me when I was young and it was a small ride back with training wheelcome, so I learned to Raise. My dad's broke called the Elphin Rose is moved up with my friends helps us work.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Well, I think bags are quite popular in my country, especially in peak cities because things are cheap and covered for sure trains, for example, many people always share advice to go to work shops and students also
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 25.0Gợi ý: 回答里有一些内容似乎与“小时候有自行车”相关,例如父母买车、辅助轮和学骑车,但多处表达难以理解,影响了整体沟通。先用一句话直接回答问题,再补充两三个清楚、具体的细节。注意使用正确词汇,如“bought me a bike”“training wheels”和“learned to ride”,并避免加入难以辨认的内容。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. My parents bought me a small bike with training wheels when I was about six. I used it to practise riding in our neighborhood, and I often went cycling with my friends.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 你表达了自行车在城市中受欢迎的观点,也尝试说明原因和举例,但关键词和句子关系不清楚,答案最后也没有说完。请直接回答后,用清楚的连接词解释一到两个原因,例如自行车便宜、方便,适合短途通勤;再补充上班族或学生的具体例子。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in large cities. They are affordable and convenient for short trips, and people can avoid traffic jams. For example, some students cycle to school, while office workers use bikes to get to nearby workplaces.
× and students also
✓ and students also use them.
这部分只有主语“students”和副词“also”,缺少谓语动词,因此句子不完整。结合上下文,可补充“use them”(也使用自行车),使表达有完整的主谓结构。