Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
When I was a child, I didn't have a bike because my family in a very good way may I didn't really buy a bike for me.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, I do. I think bikes are popular in my country because by country by bikes is very healthy and comfortable.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: 先直接回答是否有自行车,再用 because 解释原因。表达家庭经济状况时,可说“my family wasn’t very well-off”;原句中的“my family in a very good way”不符合英语表达。注意使用完整句子,例如“I didn’t have... because...”,并避免不确定的“may”。
Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have a bike as a child because my family wasn’t very well-off. I usually walked or took the bus to get around.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 开头“Yes, I do”回答直接,但后面的原因表达不清。可以说骑自行车“is a healthy and convenient way to travel”,并补充具体场景,例如通勤或短途出行。注意用“in my country”,不要重复或混淆“by”。
Ví dụ: Yes, I do. Bikes are quite popular in my country because cycling is a healthy and convenient way to travel. Many people use them for short trips or to commute to work.
× When I was a child, I didn't have a bike because my family in a very good way may I didn't really buy a bike for me.
✓ When I was a child, I didn't have a bike because my family wasn't doing very well, so they couldn't buy one for me.
“my family in a very good way”缺少谓语动词,句子结构不完整。可以用“wasn't doing very well”补上谓语,表示“情况不太好”。另外,结合上下文,用“they couldn't buy one for me”表达家人无法给我买自行车更清楚。
× When I was a child, I didn't have a bike because my family in a very good way may I didn't really buy a bike for me.
✓ When I was a child, I didn't have a bike because my family wasn't doing very well, so they couldn't buy one for me.
原句中“because my family in a very good way may I didn't...”的词序和句子连接方式混乱,无法构成清楚、完整的原因表达。可用“because ... so ...”说明原因和结果,并让“they”指代家人。
× Yes, I do. I think bikes are popular in my country because by country by bikes is very healthy and comfortable.
✓ Yes, I do. I think bikes are popular in my country because riding bikes is very healthy and comfortable.
表达“骑自行车”时,可以用动名词短语“riding bikes”作主语。原句中的“by country by bikes”不能构成正确的动名词短语;改为“riding bikes”后,后接单数谓语“is”是正确的。