Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, umm, when I was a child. I have my own back and I like it very much.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, bags are very popular in my country because it's it's very convenient.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 38.0

Gợi ý: 先直接回答问题,再补充一两个具体细节。你提到小时候有自己的自行车,但“I have my own back”表达不清楚;如果想说“我有自己的自行车”,应说“I had my own bike”。由于问题询问过去的经历,注意使用过去时,如“had”和“rode”。可以补充自行车的颜色、用途或骑车的感受,并避免用“umm”填充停顿。

Ví dụ: Yes, I had my own bike when I was a child. It was blue, and I often rode it around my neighborhood after school. I really enjoyed the freedom it gave me.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 45.0

Gợi ý: 开头应明确回答自行车是否受欢迎;注意这里应说“bikes”,而不是“bags”。你给出了原因,但“it's very convenient”中的“it”指代不清,而且重复了“it's”。可以说明自行车对谁方便、在哪些场景方便,并加入一个具体例子,使回答更有说服力。

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because they’re convenient for short trips. For example, many people ride them to nearby shops or to work, especially when traffic is heavy.

Ngữ pháp

5: Past tense issue(过去时错误)

× I have my own back and I like it very much.

✓ I had my own back and liked it very much.

这句话描述的是童年时期的情况,前文也用了过去时“was”,所以“have”和“like”应改为过去式“had”和“liked”。建议叙述过去经历时,保持句子中的动词时态一致。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Back— Rear; Reverse; Backward
Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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