Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Well, I don't have a bike and I was still a child, but I do have a childhood friend who has it and that's what I learned how to ride a bike.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, bikes are usually popular here since it is more affordable than cars and motorbikes. It's what people usually conveniently use when they go to their work because you can easily go through the traffic without going through

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.5

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 48.0

Gợi ý: Answer the question directly and clarify whether you owned a bike as a child. Your current wording is confusing because “I don't have a bike” refers to the present, and “who has it” has an unclear reference. Use the past tense and explain briefly how your friend helped you. Keep the response natural and within five sentences.

Ví dụ: No, I didn't have my own bike as a child. However, my childhood friend had one and taught me how to ride it. I used to borrow it when we played together.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 52.0

Gợi ý: Give a direct answer, then support it with clear reasons. Use “bicycles” or “they” rather than “it” to match the plural subject, and say “commute to work” instead of “go to their work.” Avoid the unfinished phrase at the end; explain that bikes can help people avoid traffic or add a specific example.

Ví dụ: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country because they are much cheaper to buy and maintain than cars or motorbikes. Many people use them to commute to work, especially in busy cities, because they can avoid traffic jams and find parking more easily.

Ngữ pháp

5: Past tense issue

× Well, I don't have a bike and I was still a child, but I do have a childhood friend who has it and that's what I learned how to ride a bike.

✓ Well, I didn't have a bike when I was a child, but I had a childhood friend who had one, and that's how I learned to ride a bike.

The question asks about the student's childhood, so the answer should use past tense for events and circumstances in that period. Use didn't have and had rather than don't have and do have. The phrase when I was a child also clearly expresses the time being discussed.

26: Sentence structure errors

× Well, I don't have a bike and I was still a child, but I do have a childhood friend who has it and that's what I learned how to ride a bike.

✓ Well, I didn't have a bike when I was a child, but I had a childhood friend who had one, and that's how I learned to ride a bike.

The construction that's what I learned how to ride a bike combines two different patterns. Use that's how I learned to ride a bike to explain the way the student learned. Use that's where I learned to ride a bike if referring to a place.

12: Incorrect use of pronouns

× Yes, bikes are usually popular here since it is more affordable than cars and motorbikes.

✓ Yes, bikes are usually popular here since they are more affordable than cars and motorbikes.

The pronoun it is singular, but it refers to bikes, which is plural. Use they to agree with the plural noun.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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