Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I have a vibe when I was a child because I loved cycling and I seldom cycling with my brothers and weekends, so I think my bike is important for me when I was a child.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, I think flights are popular in my country because people in my country always decides to travel for example some people I think first you use ice to truffle from in non towels and more some people will use ice
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: 你能表达自己小时候有自行车,也提到了和兄弟骑车,但有多处语法和用词错误,影响理解。注意使用过去时:用“had”而不是“have”;“vibe”应为“bike”;“seldom cycling”应改为“often rode”或“used to ride”。“在周末”可说“at weekends”。最后一句重复表达了自行车很重要,可以改为一个具体原因,例如它让你和兄弟有机会一起玩。
Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I often rode it with my brothers at weekends, and it was one of my favourite ways to have fun.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 10.0Gợi ý: 目前答案中多处词语难以辨认,且似乎没有清楚回答自行车在你们国家是否流行。请先直接回答“popular”或“不太流行”,然后补充一至两个具体理由,例如通勤、锻炼或城市骑行环境。避免重复“in my country”,并注意主谓一致:people 后使用“decide”。
Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities. Many people ride them to work or school because they are affordable and convenient, and cycling is also a good way to exercise.
× I have a vibe when I was a child
✓ I had a vibe when I was a child.
句子描述的是“小时候”的经历,属于过去时间,因此应使用过去式 had,而不是现在式 have。
× I seldom cycling with my brothers
✓ I seldom cycled with my brothers.
seldom 后面不能直接接动词的 -ing 形式。这里描述过去的习惯,应使用一般过去式 cycled。
× with my brothers and weekends
✓ with my brothers on weekends
表示“在周末”时,weekends 前通常使用介词 on。可以记住固定搭配 on weekends。
× I think my bike is important for me when I was a child.
✓ I think my bike was important for me when I was a child.
when I was a child 指过去的时间,因此描述自行车当时很重要时,应使用过去式 was,而不是 is。
× people in my country always decides to travel
✓ people in my country always decide to travel
主语 people 是复数,谓语动词应使用原形 decide,不能使用第三人称单数形式 decides。